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Old 21-Oct-13, 05:07
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Default Re: Destruction of a weakling

To me the story started great but not to include the complete destruction and his being totally forced into a broken pleading for his life mess and his being forced into complete submission as her defeated slave in front of all watching is like depriving a starving animal of his dinner alas for me a complete let down
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