View Single Post
  #11  
Old 23-Oct-16, 02:07
Sexybish's Avatar
Sexybish Sexybish is offline
Senior Member
Points: 10,583, Level: 44 Points: 10,583, Level: 44 Points: 10,583, Level: 44
Activity: 0% Activity: 0% Activity: 0%
Last Achievements
 
Join Date: Jan 2014
Gender: Female
Location: London, England
Posts: 646
Thanks: 144
Thanked 324 Times in 164 Posts
Default Re: Courage and Cowardice?

Quote:
Originally Posted by blueblade999 [Only Registered Users Can See LinksClick Here To Register]
Vannah:

Thanks for your comments. Sorry it made you nauseous. I wonder did the reasons it did so include a) she's too superhero-ish, b) too bloody too quickly?

Thank you for the encouragement.

Best,

BlueBlade
It may be that, I just don't like gore in wrestling too much. Some people do, and more power to them, but I'm not one of them. That being said, I said it before and I'll say it again; this is well written. The protagonist in this story is not necessarily superhero-ish, as the events in your story, I believe, are represented in a realistic enough way that I could definitely see it in my mind. Keep going, and I'll be sure to support any other stories you decide to write, especially if they haven't got as much gore.

And don't mention it about the comments. Blackice has been commenting this or very similar comments on many stories and it's getting on my bloody nerves.
__________________
Vannah Clairmont
Wrestler, Writer, Singer, Unbelievable Bitch
I promise I'll update my thread soon. Don't kill me.
Reply With Quote
The Following User Says Thank You to Sexybish For This Useful Post: