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Old 26-Dec-16, 22:35
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Default Re: Sgpin sculpture

Wow, Cal! Amazing render!

Everything is awesome already, but here are the changes that I would really love to see in the final render:

- a tighter sit. Right now she is hovering over the male, mostly pinning using her knees, whereas I would love her to properly sit on him. Knees might go a little wider in order to achieve this. This might also result in lifting the female's head and shoulder a bit further, since the hips would come down, we might get a more clearer view of the face.
- the female's feet closer to the male's body, legs a little wider would help here as well, with knees almost on the male's elbows; it should look like she is almost hugging him with the legs; but feet clearly visible
- hands grabbing and pinning wrists rather than fingerlocking; adds intensity to the pin in my opinion; a little longer arms on the male would help, since this would require a little more bending in his elbows
- a little less masculine female overall with smaller biceps / forearms. Only slightly defined muscles.
- the outfits: male wearing tight shorts, the female wearing tight shorts and sports bra

Thank a lot for the awesome job on this, Cal! Totally up to you to use or not use any of the above changes. I like it the way it is already.
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