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Old 19-Jul-17, 02:55
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Default Re: step sister defeats her step brother.

Looking toward to the second part. I'm hoping she continues to dominate her older brother. I like the face sit/ smother direction. And like other people said describe how he feels getting dominated by his sister.
This is your first story and it's really good. Writing these types of stories is not the easiest thing.
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