Re: Queen of the Kill A Hunger Games type Story
Well it took a while, but I finally finish reading your story. It well written, had some great smother/facesitting scenes and it's an excellent parady.
That said, I still don't understand the logistics of the story here. The vast majority of those being smothered to death, are young men. Governments sweep and population control aside, I don't understand how this socity can survive. Wouldn't the supply of men (young or otherwise) be gone, WAAAYYY before they can be replaced? This is especially a problem when you considered how often facesitting to death occurs.
That something to think about.
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