The Worst Night of His Life

[qwertyuio]

Originally Posted by rcress232 [Only Registered Users Can See LinksClick Here To Register]

I'll bet it was. The things she says to him in this story are extremely erotic. And I really felt his desperation and his realization that he had no choice but to be her slave very intensely. Of course, the domination with her feet was an awesome idea; I've always felt women using their feet to humiliate is a very good way to show superiority and I try to incorporate that in my stories as well.

Agree 100%. There is no better way to show it!

It might be more impressive if it a lot of it hadnt been co-written and then posted against the cowriters wishes to take credit for yoursekf

Yeah, I know the guy who did most of that for you. Low blow.

[qwertyuio]

Originally Posted by dj200 [Only Registered Users Can See LinksClick Here To Register]

It might be more impressive if it a lot of it hadnt been co-written and then posted against the cowriters wishes to take credit for yoursekf

Yeah, I know the guy who did most of that for you. Low blow.

First of all the other author wrote less than 50% of the original. We took turns every 2 paragraphs or so before I did the entire ending myself. After he said he didn't want his writing published, I spent 2 hours either deleting his parts altogether or editing them. Finally, I could care less about "taking credit" for anything. I don't get paid to post stories here. If you copied and pasted this story on the valkyrie under your name, it doesn't matter to me.

[Hungpong]

Anyone know of any similar stories to this one?