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Old 14-Mar-17, 11:13
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The line with the n-word was totally unnecessary, imo.
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Old 14-Mar-17, 16:36
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The line with the n-word was totally unnecessary, imo.
But it's okay because she's a Mary Sue.

Should have added a trigger warning to that phrase.
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Old 15-Mar-17, 01:39
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I figured something taboo or forbidden would help to create a somewhat authentic pornographic story.
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Old 15-Mar-17, 06:31
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Well, to tell you the truth, I guess I would take some things back, because I would say that in the past, some stories that have relied on extreme violence have turned me on a lot, stories by reaper002000 and Dmaynard have made me horny, and I felt that maybe I was a little bit harsh. There were some parts that were pretty good in the story, the writing was high quality. I guess the reason why I found this story a little harsher than those other author's stories was maybe because the people who always seem to die in those stories sort of deserve it, and in this last chapter, perhaps the dad did, in terms of his abuse, and I could even say the brother did for being an asshole when they were younger, pushing his athletic accomplishments in her face. But the mother dying, why? Because she let the abuse happen?

Anyway, I'm willing to just say that maybe I was a bit harsh and premature to condemn your content the way that I did. I feel like a bit of a hypocrite for enjoying the content in a story like the Monster and Mercy, and not enjoy this, which is pretty much along those same lines, a torture/snuff muscle fiction story.
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Old 15-Mar-17, 19:23
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This story seems kind of racist.
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Default Amanda Part 4 - The Boyfriend

Amanda Part 4—The Boyfriend


Amanda and Ryan were working out in her three million dollar two-story loft in Williamsburg, Brooklyn. Spacious rooms with long divan couches, sculptures and bookcases. Matisse, Basquiat and Matthew Barney among others on the walls. On the second floor, half of which had been converted to a gym, Ryan stretched his legs while looking at Amanda’s arms doing bicep curls. Even though they had been dating for over six months he was still in awe. Huge biceps and triceps where all of the contours of her muscles were meticulously accentuated. Forearms thick and wide. Arms big if not bigger than a lot of fit men he knew. And despite her muscles she was gorgeous—a woman any man would say is beautiful. Sometimes her artsy, pretentious clothes and her muscles were distracting to Ryan but still her feminine beauty was always apparent.

“17, 18, 19…20”, said Amanda as she put down the twenty-pound dumb bells, occasionally flexing, making her biceps almost grotesquely big.

“Good work-out babe,” said Ryan.

“Yeah, nice burn,” said Amanda.

“Lookin good.”

“Lookin real good.” Amanda smiled and did a double-bicep pose. She then got close to Ryan and playfully pushed him a little.

“Think you’re so tough now, uh?” chuckled Ryan.

“Yeah, I think so.” Ryan smiled and continued to stretch, Amanda pushed him again.

“That’s it, your going down,” said Ryan. He wrapped his arms around Amanda in a strong embrace. “I’m going down, uh?” said Amanda.

Amanda got out of the hold. She crouched down and tackled Ryan to the floor. He laughed as Amanda was on top of him and had him pinned down.

“What are you going to do now? You got me,” said Ryan.

“You’ll see. Aren’t you going to put up a fight?” Ryan smiled and got out of her pin and they began to wrestle. He couldn’t help but notice Amanda’s flawless six-pack abs. Really her whole physique was a bodybuilder’s dream. In a few moments he was sitting on her stomach and holding her arms down.

“Good job, big macho man.”

“Now what?”

“Now this!”

Amanda quickly wrapped her huge, muscular thighs around Ryan's mid section and squeezed.

“Not bad”, said Ryan. “This might be tough to get out of.” Ryan was a little surprised, she had never done this move before. He put his hands on her thighs and tried to pry them open, but they wouldn’t budge. In vain he jerked to his left and right to maneuver his way out.

“What’s wrong big boy? Am I too strong for you?” Ryan's lower ribs were beginning to ache.

“Alright babe, you got me, this is starting to hurt a little.”

“Just a little…what about now?”

She increased the pressure and made Ryan scream. He felt as if some mechanical vice was about to crack a rib of his. “Babe, seriously stop, this is hurting.”

Amanda chuckled, “You’re the man you should be strong enough to break out of it.”

Ryan grabbed Amanda’s arm’s to throw off her balance but it was of no use. “Amanda cut it out!” shouted Ryan, now actually sounding mad. Amanda made one final squeeze and she heard two of his ribs break.

“Fucking bitch! What the fuck are you trying to do!” Amanda let go of him and stood up, as did Ryan.

“I was just playing…babe.”

“What the fuck, you just broke my ribs! I’m going to have to go to the hospital.”

“No need to get so angry, there only ribs.” Quickly she back-kicked Ryan in the face, sending him down to the ground.

“What is your problem!” yelled Ryan.

He stood back up. Anger and frustration got the best of him and he swung a punch at Amanda, who ducked to avoid the blow.

“What now bitch? You wanna do this or what?”

“Let’s do this…bitch.”

She then threw two quick punches at his face, both times hitting his nose, which started to bleed. Ryan couldn’t believe how powerful and precise her punches were. They were really like bricks smashing into his face. “Your fucking dead bitch!” shouted Ryan.

“That’s what you keep implying, but you seem to be all talk and no action—bitch.” Ryan charged and tackled her to the ground. He threw a punch at Amanda’s face which gave her a slight bruise. It didn’t hurt her too much, if anything it just enraged her as they wrestled around. A few moments later she got on top and held him down with her thighs. She swung and hit him in the face, then she slapped him.

“Ryan, your gonna let your girlfriend bitch slap ya?” She slapped him again and as he was about to grab her hand she quickly sent a hard punch to his nose—this time breaking it.


Ryan had been cheating. It wasn’t that Amanda liked him that much, but the fact that he would do that to her and lie about it really pissed her off. She felt he should feel grateful and lucky to date someone like her. She was a world-famous artist, and he was just a second-rate guitarist for some hipster band that no one gave a shit about. Also, Amanda had not indulged in the dark side for some time now. It had already been over a year since she had visited her family…she knew the bodies were adding up, the horror becoming greater and greater, but she could not stop. It was a passion of such great indestructibility and transcendence it was becoming vital to her way of life.


Amanda stood up and smiled. Her muscles now pumped. Despite what had happened—Ryan, being the man—still thought he was stronger than Amanda. He felt he was taken off guard. In reality his mind was racing to make any excuse for the emasculation that had just taken place.

He charged at her as before and once they were on the ground they wrestled for a few moments until again Amanda was on top of him pinning his body down. Her strength and power were astounding. His respectable muscular build in his arms and legs were simply outclassed. The realization that she was the stronger person now sank in for Ryan…
Again Amanda punched Ryan in the face. This time swelling up and reddening his left eye. Then again…and again. Soon his face was becoming unrecognizable…almost like one of Amanda’s abstract paintings on her walls. She then got up and kneed him in the face sending him back a few feet sprawled on the floor.

“Ryan, Ryan my sweet Ryan. All bloody and gross. What happened? Some gang come by and fuck you up?”

“Wha…wha…why are you doing this?” It was difficult for Ryan to talk.

“Because I’m pretty sure at this point I’m a sociopath and I know you have been cheating on me. And I don’t like that Ryan. Not one bit.”

“You’re insane! I’ve… never cheated on you. Please stop. Call 911 or take me to the hospital.”

“Stand up.”

“Fuck you.”

“You like joyrides Ryan?”

“What are you talking about?”

“Joyrides! Their so much fun and they really highlight what I’m capable of physically.”

Amanda picked him up by his neck and legs and dead lifted him above her head.

“Wha are you doing? Put me down…I’m hurt…”

“Your hurt? I don’t think so, your not ‘hurt’ yet. Not yet. But soon.”

Amanda threw Ryan's body against a white wall smearing it with his blood. She then picked him up again and threw him against workout machines.

Despite his pain, Ryan was slowly crawling away attempting to reach the stairs. Amanda grabbed him before he got anywhere and with both arms bunched up his t-shirt, lifting his damaged frame off the ground. Holding him up with her left arm she wound back her right and punched him yet again in the stomach. The most powerful punch yet. She did it again and again. Fracturing ribs, wounding the body, destroying the ego.

“Ryan, Ryan how does it feel?” Amanda pursed her lips in genuine curiosity. “How does it feel to be almost beaten to death by your girlfriend. How does it feel? Does it turn you on?” Amanda brought his face inches from hers and in a husky voice, “cause it fucking turns me on.” She roughly grabbed Ryan's genitals. All he could do out of protest was meekly yelp. Amanda rubbed it into a erection while tears flowed down Ryan's cheek.

Amanda dropped her boyfriend. She went over to an adjacent room and came back holding a shiny, black, strap-on dildo. She put her hand down her workout shorts and started rubbing herself , “You know all of this working out has made my clit so big,” Amanda took on the voice of a thuggish, ghetto teenager, “damn!, you know I’m not even sure if I need this,” Amanda laughed and then decided “nah it will be more fun.” Amanda strapped on the dildo. “Now take off your clothes bitch. I’m horny.”

Ryan did not respond.

“Take them off now! Fucker!” Again no response except for crying and futile moans. Amanda leaned down and whispered into his ear “I’ll only ask you one more time Ryan or else I will break something…” The threat worked as Ryan slowly managed to slip out of his shorts and underwear. Roughly she turned him around and began the penetration with quick, violent thrusts.

Amanda slowly felt down Ryan’s stomach to his hips like a man would do to a woman. With her right hand she sensually rubbed his stomach in circles and whispered, “Is there where the baby will kick? You will be the mother right?” She then buckled, twisted, and horsed her way thru his virginal sphincter, going in deeper and deeper and soon there was blood.

Amanda's eyes fluttered, her black hair was sweaty and disheveled. Her breasts swung from above his head like great wrecking balls and she screamed and roared like a ferocious lion in carnal frenzy awaiting an African apocalypse. Sweat dotted her forehead but there was no pain, no suffering for her, all of her exertion was vindicating her amazing feat for womankind.

Ryan smelt her feminine deodorant and felt somewhere deep down that reality had sanctioned this madness to be insufferable to him and him alone. The limits were no more for Ryan. What he could ever know now of limits?

Amanda slowed down in preparation for one of the greatest orgasms of her life, she wanted to savor the last few blissful thrusts as much as possible.
“O fuck me, fuck me, fuck Me,” Amanda cried, “FUCK ME! FUCK ME! FUCK ME FUCKER! FUCK ME YOU PIECE OF SHIT!”

The last thrust came. The deed was done. Amanda lost herself to her senses, and feel down on top of Ryan. Amanda opened her eyes and looked up, “O GOD! O MY GOD! That…was… amazing!” Amanda laughed in complete abandonment and liberation.

Ryan was very close to being unconscious. Amanda sat up on one elbow and looked over at Ryan and his disfigured visage and the blood still seeping out his anus. A smile slowly crept over her face. She was not repulsed or grossed out, rather she thought it comical and strangely artistic. Melodically she whispered, “Ryan.” Then in her normal voice, “you still alive babe?” Strongly punctuating the end of the word babe. Ryan whimpered something. Amanda nudged closer.

“What was that hon?”

“Fu…fuck…you.”

“O I’m sorry, was I too rough? I’m sorry.”

Amanda laid Ryan's head on her thigh. Gently she stroked his hair. He coughed up some blood.

“Here let me make it up to you. I’ll give you a back rub,” said Amanda as she turned him around and began to massage his back. As she gently rubbed around his spine she kept looking at his neck, noticing fragile it really was. “There there I didn’t mean to play so rough. I’m sorry babe.” Amanda kissed Ryan’s sweaty hair and ran her hand down his face, feeling his half-closed eyes, disfigured nose, swollen lips and bloated cheeks. “You know what I think will cheer you up?” She whispered into his ear, “Can you guess?”

Ryan made some indiscernible noise.

“Yeah I think you know.”

Amanda lifted Ryan onto one of her ten thousand dollar divan couches and sat him down. She got in front of him, on her knees. Slowly and with a strange coyness she unzipped his pants and took out his penis and genitals. She ignored Ryan's weak protests and began sucking gently, passionately as if for a split second she genuinely wanted to offer some sort of compensation.

As Amanda continued to suck, Ryan gathered his strength to offer what retaliation he could. Despite all he had been through he still had a few shreds of dignity left. He looked to his left and saw a lamp, quickly he picked it up and slammed it on Amanda’s back shattering it into several pieces. Amanda screamed. Amanda roared. She was not hurt, however there were a few cuts on her back. She stood up and with bloodthirsty eyes threw a barrage of punches at his face. Then, she got on her knees and in a fit of rage and fury with both hands grabbed his penis and violently twisted and crushed his shaft until she heard a crack and it was fractured. Ryan finally passed out.

“Oh Ryan, baby baby. It was fun.”

Amanda grinned and dug into his sweaty scrotum with her sharp black nails. After a few moments of pulling and tearing she managed to rip out his testicles. Small, red, distorted, wet little ball-like pieces of flesh. In a fit of high barbarism she put them into her mouth and swallowed. At first she gagged but then she regained her composure and savored the strange exotic taste of male genitalia. Not even knowing if Ryan was dead or not at this point Amanda moved Ryan so he was sitting in front of her while she sat on the couch. Amanda then wrapped her legs around his torso to stabilize his body, and placed both her hands on the side of Ryan's skull—arms akimbo. She nudged close to Ryan and whispered into his ear. Then with frightening ease and relish she snapped his neck. Ryan was now dead. Amanda shoved the corpse to the floor and victoriously stood up.

She would have to get her weekend servant to clean things up.

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Old 13-Nov-17, 01:32
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Default Re: Amanda Part 4 - The Boyfriend

Any comments or suggestions?

Also, does anyone know if the great Silentcrs or Kickfan who wrote the Heidi stories are still writing?
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Old 13-Nov-17, 02:10
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Default Re: Amanda Part 4 - The Boyfriend

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Any comments or suggestions?

Also, does anyone know if the great Silentcrs or Kickfan who wrote the Heidi stories are still writing?
Well, my feeling on the story was that I enjoyed it somewhat, but because I'm not completely into violence and snuff, I couldn't get into it 100%, like I have said multiple times on multiple stories, and that hasn't changed here, but the muscle description and feats of strength were still cool.

Kickfan hasn't written a new story for a while, concentrating more on doing 3-D renders as can be seen on his deviantart page (warning: loli muscle girls involved.)

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Silentcrs most recently has written a story for Amy's Conquest, which can be found here:

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Old 13-Nov-17, 02:36
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Default Re: Amanda Part 4 - The Boyfriend

Thanks for the links!

Added after 5 minutes:

I know it's weird and perverse, but the man dying at the end is essential for me.

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Default Re: Amanda

I could most definitely do without the n word
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