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What did everybody think of this part? finally got to the fight, would love some feedback! This was about 7/9th as long as the last part, was it obvious things were shorter? Did they seem less meaty?
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What can I say?
I like stories with women physically dominating men, especially if it concerns women that the men have to live with rather than a woman who will disappear out of the man's life after the physical domination. For this reason, I especially like stories containing a woman who physically overpowers the man in a wife-husband relationship, a sister-brother relationship or even a mother-son relationship.
However, if it concerns relatives, the physical domination should be confined to just that. I do not like sexual content between relatives. That is incest, and incest utterly disgusts me.
Especially a wife-husband relationship is preferable, since you as a husband are deeply in love with and sexually attracted to your wife. Otherwise, you wouldn't have made her your wife! So if that woman, the woman whose body and personality you admire so much, suddenly turns out to be capable of dominating you either by physical strength, either by martial arts - or even a combination of both - followed with some playful humiliation (like kissing her foot and accepting the terms that she dictates to you, knowing that you don't have a choice), is quite sexy.
Also, since a wife and husband aren't relatives to each other (in most cases, since some backward countries allow marriage between cousins...), I am completely fine with sexual content between those two people.
I, however, am a little bit strange in the sense that reading about penetration sex, sucking each other's genitals or other sexual acts don't cause any sexual excitement or stimulation inside of me. I am totally indifferent to those kind of things. The only thing that I really like, is the physical domination by the girl: the part where she applies unescapable scissor holds on you, armbars, camel clutch, other wrestling holds, or even where she delivers hard and powerful kicks to various parts of your body, if she isn't afraid to injure you.
In your first story, I noticed an unhealthy attitude of the mother towards her son, which - I feared - would ultimately result in incest. This is the reason why I didn't even finish reading the first part. I usually like this concept, but some elements of the story were just too unsettling for me to ignore. When you posted your second part, I only read the last few paragraphs, in which my prediction appeared to be correct: incest.
If you made a story similar to this one, but without the unhealthy attitude of the mother and without the incest, I would gladly read it! :-D
Re: Crushed by My Dominant Mother
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