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Old 16-Feb-18, 16:06
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Default Re: Defeated by the Champion, an interactive story on CHYOA

You put a lot of work into this and it's fricking fantastic! More humiliation would be a perfect addition, especially the over the knee spanking idea.
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Old 16-Feb-18, 16:35
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A bit more of description of her long hair would be cool. Also the thread I was going through had jack meeting her again after beating you and just dropped off. It might be cool to see a rematch where she goes all out and humiliates you again to prove she can do it anytime, anywhere.
I’ll keep that in mind about the hair.

A rematch would probably be a separate story of its own; I was considering a sequel involving her training you.

The drop-off at the end probably has something to do with the way I set up the last chapter; there are a bunch of nested if-statements to create a custom ending for each scenario and one of them might be missing a close-paren or some such. What options did you take to get to the end?
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Default Re: Defeated by the Champion, an interactive story on CHYOA

Really loved this story! I'm not sure if I missed it but was there a stinkface part in the corner of the room or no?
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Old 14-Mar-18, 16:57
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Really loved this story! I'm not sure if I missed it but was there a stinkface part in the corner of the room or no?
There was! I forget what the path to it is, though. You can find it if you check the story map.

I’m working on a few extra chapters right now, including a headscissors path for the audience volunteer (her name doesn’t have to be Melody, it’s customizable just like your name and the Champion’s), and two “new challenger appears” paths involving other ECL fighters, with potentially a third later on.

Also, I’d like to write other stories in this universe at some point, but I honestly don’t know how well that would work—I put pretty much every idea I had for a sexy wrestling match into “Defeated by the Champion”, so almost anything I could do for a future story would just be a retread of what I’ve written here. I do have an idea for a plot for one if I can figure out some unique moves for it, though...
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Default Re: Defeated by the Champion, an interactive story on CHYOA

Really interesting way to tell a story — well done...
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Old 05-Apr-18, 22:00
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Volunteer headscissors chapter is up. Still working on the “other ECL wrestlers intervene” paths, though. I’m currently planning to have two possible wrestlers appear; the branches for the first are partway done at the moment. I am, as always, open to other suggestions (though keep in mind that I do plan to write other stories in this universe if I can, and I May end up putting them in one of those instead).
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One of the best story
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Added a new branch to the story where another ECL wrestler shows up. This one’s a little more linear than the others but it does still have a few possible outcomes. I’ll probably add one or two more branches to DBTC before I move on from it, but I think for now I’ll be taking a hiatus to work on other projects.
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Okay, I lied about the hiatus, one of those “other projects” proved to be a lot easier than I thought it was going to be. I’ve added another “new challenger appears” branch. And with that I think I can say with confidence that, barring a specific request for a chapter from someone here, this story is done. I’ve invested a lot of time into this project and the warm reception it’s gotten here has been really gratifying, so thank you all for taking a look.

That said, though...

I’m thinking of doing something new in the world of the ECL. I want to do a broader, more general story about what it’s like to be a fighter in the League. But I think this is going to be bigger than I can handle on my own, so I’m hoping to open it to anyone who wants to contribute. For more details, go here:

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