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Old 16-Apr-18, 10:39
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Another great part
Would love to see a picture of natalgia if u have any
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Old 16-Apr-18, 19:29
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Another great part
Would love to see a picture of natalgia if u have any
Thanks. As for Natalija, when I was creating her character I had Serbian-Australian actress [Only Registered Users Can See LinksClick Here To Register] in mind when I comes to appearance, just a little taller and slightly more athletic/strong.
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Old 17-Apr-18, 00:19
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I'm really liking this story. Would like to see more muscle flexing on the girls' part.
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Old 17-Apr-18, 00:43
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Thanks for all the suggestions, they're much appreciated and inspire me with new ideas!

I'm keeping them all in mind and I'll drop them in when it's convenient.

For example, I put the arm wrestling in the last part which was a good idea that was suggested to me one the first page but I just couldn't use it before. I want each fight to have nice build up and aftermath and an original setting so that it doesn't get repetitive. I like if the male regains some confidence in between and has some interactions with characters so that every loss is more unique and more memorable.

I'm going to have a fight involving a middle-aged woman next like people asked for. It was a good idea too and I'm going to use it now. I'm saving boxing for a bit later but it's definitely still a plan.

I'm just curious how much interest there is for F vs F fights? I was thinking about including a F vs F fight in the story as well.

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Old 17-Apr-18, 07:47
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F v F is also a good idea, as you certainly know how to build up a story. However, I'm looking forward to more bro vs sis
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Old 17-Apr-18, 08:12
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Yes !!!F vs F is absolutely a brilliant idea
I wonder what would be the aftermath if Clara takes on Svetlana or natalgia
I would also like to see a tag team match between Clara/Julian and Svetlana/natlagia
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Old 17-Apr-18, 09:21
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Another great part
Would love to see a picture of natalgia if u have any
Great story - but this is fiction so how could he post a picture of 'her'?
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Loving the story so far! Are there any plans for him to wrestle his mum btw?
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Old 17-Apr-18, 10:46
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Great story - but this is fiction so how could he post a picture of 'her'?
No I meant if he has Any picture of a model in his mind to show us like he did for Svetlana and clara
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F v F is also a good idea, as you certainly know how to build up a story. However, I'm looking forward to more bro vs sis
I'll include a boxing match between the two of them later on when the bro will become independent, start training sports more and regain his manliness a bit and would be more confident in his victory against his sister and the stakes would be higher. At this point he is too emasculated to challenge his sis again and a loss wouldn't be so humiliating because he is currently accepting her physical superiority and they have a good relationship. I'm focusing more on his sister's emotional and intellectual dominance over him now.

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Yes !!!F vs F is absolutely a brilliant idea
I wonder what would be the aftermath if Clara takes on Svetlana or natalgia
I would also like to see a tag team match between Clara/Julian and Svetlana/natlagia
I think this is a 50-50 fight. Clara is in better shape but Svetlana is more used to catfights and fighting dirty and she's a bit heavier. I'm thinking about just throwing the dice and select the winner with a draw and then adapt the story accordingly as both outcomes have equally good potential. I think it's better for the readers too if there's total uncertainty. It will definitely be a passionate and emotional fight, a bit like a tribute to DWW catfights and there will be a nice build up with both of them hating each other and wanting to really humiliate the other girl.

Thanks for the tag team suggestion too.

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Loving the story so far! Are there any plans for him to wrestle his mum btw?
It's a possibility down the road, definitely.
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