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Mother Son Wrestling Interactive Story
Hello, gentlemen. I enjoy writing short stories in my free time, and have recently began writing more frequently. I figured that this story that I wrote was interesting enough to share on this website. It involves a mother and son in an intense wrestling match.
[Only Registered Users Can See LinksClick Here To Register] I would love if I could receive your constructive criticism of this story. Did you like it being in second person? Should I name my characters? Is it too long or too short? Is it entertaining enough? I want to hear everything that you think. I will probably be writing more stories in the future, so I would also ask if you all could help me choose a plot for the next story. |
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Re: Mother Son Wrestling Interactive Story
Great story Gbottyg. I tried it a couple of times answering the questions differently. Great job with that.
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Re: Mother Son Wrestling Interactive Story
Very nice!
I like the mother son plot. I say stick with it. Aunt nephew is good too. |
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I read through this a couple of times, trying different responses and liked the results each time. I also liked the format of the Inklewriter site for your story and the way it simply continued down rather than branching to a new page. It meant you could read back over the whole thing once you finished.
Thank you for sharing it with us. It was well written, well laid out and the mother seemed very attractive and realistic. |
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Re: Mother Son Wrestling Interactive Story
This is so cool! Please write more!
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Awesome, would have loved some arm wrestling!
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It was cool but the ending sucked.
It should have ended in a KO. |
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Loved it!
Would LOVE to see more mother son scissor stories. Well done! |
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Fun story, but I'm disappointed that there's only one path where the son wins.
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