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Old 26-Jul-17, 03:17
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Default Re: Easton vs Anna. The sister vs brother wrestling match!

Screw it!!! I have been thinking about writing another story, but I have changed my mind. I will continue this story, but I need everyone's help. In the next parts, which of these should I add next? Their mom? Easton's girlfriend? One of Anna's friends? Or any other ideas? Just tell me any ideas you have that I can add in this story. Please send me back some responses if you want me to continue this story.
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Default Re: Easton vs Anna. The sister vs brother wrestling match!

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Old 26-Jul-17, 08:07
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One of Anna's friends
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Screw it!!! I have been thinking about writing another story, but I have changed my mind. I will continue this story, but I need everyone's help. In the next parts, which of these should I add next? Their mom? Easton's girlfriend? One of Anna's friends? Or any other ideas? Just tell me any ideas you have that I can add in this story. Please send me back some responses if you want me to continue this story.
I vote for the mom watching the fight. Rooting for her daughter
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Default Re: Easton vs Anna. The sister vs brother wrestling match!

I vote for mom overpowering and beats Easton.
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I vote mom
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I vote Anna's friend(s).
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Default Re: Easton vs Anna. The sister vs brother wrestling match!

I like the idea of her Anna's girlfriends getting in on it. Perhaps Anna has told them that she beat up her brother but they don't believe her. She starts trying to provoke Easton into another match, even threatening to show the pictures if Easton doesn't fight her in front of her friends. Maybe Easton has had time to think that he could win if he is prepared. Anna defeats him, dominates him and then teaches her friends how to beat up and humiliate an older brother.

After another humiliating loss Easton's girlfriend could find out about him being dominated and sat upon by a bunch of younger girls and could confront him about it. That could lead to her learning that she can outwrestle him, too.

The mother scenario could happen after that, as well, with him mom discovering Anna sitting on Easton in a humiliating position. Pride in her daughter and shame in her son could have her a little confused, until Easton gets mad and shows some bad attitude, after which she encourages Anna and even has a go at him herself.

All of these storylines could flow on from one another, and from reading the works of Jericho and Holloway and others on here, I think it works well if the story and stakes kind of increases in intensity as it continues.

We all like your writing, mate. I know continuing the storyline could sound daunting to you, but don't let anybody rush you. I think it will sound better in your words than if another person takes up the story but first and foremost, you need to ENJOY what you are writing. Just have fun and I guarantee it will show through in your writing and we will love to be along for the ride.

Thanks for what you have written so far, mate. Really very appreciated.
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Default Re: Easton vs Anna. The sister vs brother wrestling match!

So here is my plan guys. The next part is going to be another match between Easton and Anna, and I'm going to try to get their mom, eastons girlfriend and Anna friends in later. I need to know what you're opinions are for this though... if Anna and her mom wrestle each other how would you like it to be out of these 3 choices. 1.they are evenly matched, each of them winning against each other half of the time and losing half.
2. Anna is stronger than her mom and she out wrestles her mom most of the time.
3. Anna's mom is stronger than Anna and outwrestles Anna most of the time.
I also plan on all of the future female characters looking like celebrities and female athletes. Who should Anna and Eastons mom look like? I know it has to be an older celebrity since th their mom has to be over 40 years old. I was thinking of Sandra Bullock or Jennifer Aniston, do one of these sound better than the other or do you have a different idea?
So please vote on which of the 3 choices you would like most and what their mom should look like to help me gets ideas on continuing this story. Thanks!
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Old 29-Jul-17, 01:05
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Default Re: Easton vs Anna. The sister vs brother wrestling match!

personally i'd like it to be close, but for Anna to win in the end as it really feels like her story. i do also like your plan of 1 last match between Anna and Easton.

as for the celebrity, i'm really not to bothered, as in the original story i had no idea who the person you said Anna looked like was, and couldn't be bothered to look her up, so i just kind of imagined her how i wanted her to look, which worked very well for me haha, but i'm sure some other people benefit much more from it.
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