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Old 30-Oct-18, 18:51
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Default Re: Beating the new kid

Hi guys I just want to give out a big thanks to those of you who read this far, and extend my thanks to those of you who read my story at all! I honestly don't mind at all if any of you disliked parts of my story, the fact that you gave it a chance is good enough for me. Before writing this story, I knew exactly what the beginning, middle and end of the story would be like, but I want to give out my apologies since the middle (sleepover weekend event) was so long, but I needed to make sure I wasn't skimping on the details as it's a vital lead-up to the protagonist's breakdown, recovery and reunion with fate (ending).

To those of you who want to comment or pm me some constructive criticisms about my writing, or just what you would personally change in the story, I'd really appreciate it. I'd to use what I learned here and get some feedback, so that I can hopefully come back and write something even better!
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