Re: Scissored in the Pool
I love how Sarah's strength opens something dominant and sadistic in her as she almost casually rearranges her relationship with Mike. There is a sense of frustration, when she mentions him getting drunk every night, and though it isn't explicitly stated, it's implied that's one of the reasons works out, so she can take control. Subtle details like that make this a great story. I hope you write more if you feel like it.
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