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Old 26-Sep-22, 01:33
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Es cómic... he omitido finalmente el texto puesto que ya se entiende lo que pasa y no me acababan de convencer los bocadillos de los diálogos... lo dejo a la imaginación.
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Old 22-Mar-23, 19:38
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De donde sacaste ese comic?
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Old 19-May-23, 16:01
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lo hago yo
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Old 20-Oct-23, 08:48
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Bum Bum Bunny
1º Episodio Castellano
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Old 20-Oct-23, 13:12
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Entreacto antes del próximo combate...
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Old 20-Oct-23, 21:43
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BumBumBunny !!!
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Buen trabajo, pero para que los combates sean mas interesantes y emocionantes, dos consejos:
A) saca las peleas del ring o del gimnasio; llévalas a otros escenarios como en "nadadoras rusas"
B) Lo mas importante de todo: motivos para la pelea. Si esta parte no esta bien, aunque el dibujo sea bueno y las chicas sean guapas y excitantes, la historia no funcionará.
C) Deja que el hombre gane de vez en cuando. Eso crea incertidumbre y añade emoción.
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