Fetish Begins - DC Comics Elseworld

[Junglebeast]

Just saw and read this last night. (No nightmares or bats flying around.) It's a wild, unique take on Batman. I would have liked more of a description of her physique and muscles. I'd love to read more how this kinky trauma, along with the deaths of his parents, turned Bruce Wayne into Batman. Maybe his "Aunt" turns young Bruce into a complete sub, which he has to over "cum" and evolve into Batman? Could it be the "Aunt" turns out to be Catwoman or Catwoman's "Aunt"?

Plenty of avenues to explore here....

[Sable Bomb]

Originally Posted by Junglebeast [Only Registered Users Can See LinksClick Here To Register]

Just saw and read this last night. (No nightmares or bats flying around.) It's a wild, unique take on Batman. I would have liked more of a description of her physique and muscles. I'd love to read more how this kinky trauma, along with the deaths of his parents, turned Bruce Wayne into Batman. Maybe his "Aunt" turns young Bruce into a complete sub, which he has to over "cum" and evolve into Batman? Could it be the "Aunt" turns out to be Catwoman or Catwoman's "Aunt"?

Plenty of avenues to explore here....

Thanks for the comment.

The character of the "Aunt" is a hybrid of Lady Dimitrescu (Resident Evil) and the Enchantress of DC Comics (Injustice 2 video game to be precise). Being a Giantess and a Sorceress it offered an unique opportunity for Bruce to end up in the way the story finishes (trying to avoid any spoilers here for potential new readers).

In regards to her physique and muscles I only briefly addressed this topic as Bruce wasn´t able to get a good look of her naked body which would have been inappropriate considering the age of the protagonist. However I will keep this in mind when designing a new costume for her which can be more revealing.

I have several different scenarios in mind what could follow next. Some of them include Bruce having matured into a teenager while others deal with becoming an adult with 18. The latter obviously allows more kinks to be included although I would naturally gravitate more towards adventures in his teenage years as the ToT-AWL storyline already has a young adult as the main character.

Kinky trauma, becoming a sub and death of parents? I have good news for you because all of this is would be a concern in a sequel. In addition it will also include a hefty dose of witchcraft otherwise the abilities of the domme would have been wasted. It would also include the introduction of new female characters naturally associated with the Batman setting.

[Junglebeast]

Growing up I was always a DC (Superman / Batman) fan. Not the '60s TV show, but the comics, and later on I did catch up with a couple of Superman and Batman movies. But that is long ago and far away. And not any of the video games. I'm impressed with your sensitivity to Bruce's age and him getting so turned on. A maturing Bruce who is 18 and comes under some erotic spell with this character (kind of a "May / September" lustful relationship) where she begins to weaken due to his superior heroic character, might really turn up the heat. Great writing and keep up the good work.

[Sable Bomb]

It´s just common sense to tone the action down when the protagonist is still a kid. If you don´t you run the risk of the story being rejected from the forum and the author labeled as a child abuser.

Yeah, the 60s Batman was a different animal compared to the more serious movies which followed later. Adam West & Burt Ward participated in a goofy TV series with brightly coloured set pieces. Funny thing was the filming of the villain scenes because these occurred at odd angles. The reason why was to show that the criminals were "crooked" individuals.

[Sable Bomb]

Bump.