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Old 10-Dec-18, 22:36
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Hallo guys!

This story was written in a very unusual way. I should say, I have been reading mixed wrestling stories for 10 years by now. And I have been writing them for 5 years by now. Maybe you all know the story named "Susan wrestles Ned" by Counselor. It was published many years ago on DTV site, and it is my favourite story ever. Unfortunately it disappeared from that site, but I kept it. I guess it's my favorite, because I had similar experience when I was a teen.

So I translated the story in Russian and extended it several times. I have been writing the Russian story for 4 years already, little by little, not so fast. Counselor's story had 25-28 pages in Word font 12. My story has about 150 pages now. It's all in Russian, though.

I publish this story in the Russian board here
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And I wrote also a prequel for it here
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Looks like it is quite popular among (not too large) Russian fetish audience, so I started to translate the extended story back to English.

I'll do it little by little, not so fast

Today I can publish only the beginning, it is mostly the same as Counselor's. I also structured the whole story into chapters and episodes.






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PROLOGUE

Springfield, Missouri
Summer 1998


It happens inevitably to all the guys. The only difference is in the details.
That's how it happened to Ned.

Jim Walter tossed a perfect spiral toward his 13-year-old son, Ned, who
envisioned himself on his way to score the winning touchdown. As Ned stretched
out his hands for the catch, his 11-year-old sister Susan, who had been watching,
suddenly darted in front of him, intercepted the football and streaked away.
Angered Ned gave chase, and, catching her, wrestled her to the ground while he
struggled for the ball. He had nearly succeeded in pulling it from her when
Susan surprised him by letting go of the ball and turning furiously on him.
Her assault rolled Ned over on his back with Susan on top. As he dropped the
ball to fight back, she reached over him trying to grab it.

Concentrating now fully on Susan, with big effort Ned pushed her up and off him. As he did so,
he found himself looking up from under the bottom of her loose fitting shirt
at two protuberances on her chest. They were very tiny but visible from his position.
He had never noticed them before, they appeared very recently. The view was instantaneous and then gone.
He reversed his effort and had another look. Yes, they were there. Then he
fought her. Their bodies strained against each other as he gained the upper
hand, forcing her down on her back. Something strange was going on between his
legs. Never had he felt anything like this; a pressure was building up in his
most private place. Maybe it was going to burst. Yes, he had a boner for the first time in his life. He pulled away and picked up the ball, breathing hard.

This brother and sister had roughhoused many times before, but here was something new, exciting and disturbing.

He had an erotic dream for the first time in his life that night. There was his classmate girl named Rose White in that dream. And a week later, he jerked off successfully, for the first time in his life.

New era started in his life.



CHAPTER 1. THE NEW ERA.
1.1. ALL CHANGED.

Episode 1. Big Brother’s most terrible day.

One day in September 1998
Springfield, Missouri


One day after school Ned, Ron and Susan roughhoused and played games on the lawn near their house. They ran after each other and tried to catch each other. Ned was 13 at the time, he started his 8 grade. Susan was 11 and a half, she was in 6th grade. Ron, the youngest, was 9.

Finally, Ned and his sister, Susan, were sent upstairs to study. Before Ned settled down, 10 year-old Ronnie sneaked up behind him and ran his fingers between the cheeks of his brother's buttox. "The great divide!" Ronnie yelled gleefully running away.

"Don't you goose me!" Ned shouted and catching him in three strides, pushed
him to the floor, kneeled beside him and began a spanking.

"Help! Help!" Ronnie cried, imploring Susan to rescue him. After a moment’s
indecision, she threw herself on top of Ned, causing him to collapse down on
Ronnie. Quickly she grabbed his right wrist with both her hands and began to
pull it back with all her might, twisting. By the time Ned had figured out
what was going on, she had his arm back far enough that she had all the
leverage she needed to go further, to force his wrist upwards completing a
hammerlock.

Ned managed to rise partially causing her to slide to her left. She kept her
grip on his wrist and, finding her legs around his waist, locked her ankles.
She straightened her legs while continuing to force his wrist up between his
shoulder blades. Ned still lying on top of Ronnie, struggled as hard as he
could but could not dislodge Susan. In fact, he was getting more trapped as
she pushed his wrist higher and continued to straighten her legs around his
now compressed abdomen. They both realized she had trapped him, Susan with
glee and Ned with dismay.

As Ronnie pulled himself out from under his older brother, Susan, continuing
to hold Ned's wrist with one hand, reached back with the other and ran her
fingers between the cheeks of Ned's buttox. "The great divide!" she called out
triumphantly. Ned made a stupendous effort to twist and turn, anything to get
loose, but nothing worked. Susan merely tightened her legs and increased his
pain by pushing his wrist even higher between his shoulder blades. As she felt
his struggles subside, the excitement of being in control overcame her. She
reached for his cleft again and ran her fingers along it. "Annnn..d......the
grrr....eat dee......vide!"

Ned saw Ronnie looking at him quizzically. "I don't fight girls," he gasped
out. He now lay still hoping that he had convinced Ronnie that he was in this
position only because he refused to fight a girl.

Susan liked the feeling of her legs around her brother of being able to do to
him what she wanted. She ran her fingers up his cleft a third time,
unknowingly causing Ned's penis to harden. Susan felt good, totally in
control. She spanked him on his buttox a couple of times and then ran her
fingers once again between the cheeks. He offered no resistance now. Her
breathing speeded up, but not from the exertion.

"I won’t fight you," was all Ned could think of to say. "I will not fight a
girl."

Susan was reluctant to let him go, but she did. She unlocked her ankles and
got up, finally letting go of his wrist. She was still excited, breathing
harder than ever. The struggle with Ned had felt good.

Ned rolled partly on his side as nonchalantly as he could, preparing to get
up. On an impulse Susan grabbed his shoulder, rolled him on his back and
plopped her rear end on his chest. Instinctively, Ned's hands went up. She
seized them both and pushed them down and leaning forward pinned him to the
rug.

What to do? Ned could hardly fight her now after what he had said about not
fighting a girl. He lay still, not resisting. Now he was more conscious of
her. He could smell her sweet breath and see the long hair close to his face.
The involuntary hardening between his legs increased almost unbearably.

"Give up?"

"No, I don't give up. This isn't fair because I'm not fighting."

"You're pinned."

"No, I'm not." He had been, but now he raised his left shoulder.

Susan moved herself forward on him so that her knees were on his shoulders.
Ned's arousal increased even more as her bare legs came closer to his face. He
raised his knees to hide his hardness. Then she put her weight on her knees.
It was painful. Ned felt an uncomfortable knotting in his stomach. If only
Ronnie weren't watching. Big Brother kept his left shoulder up as long as he could,
then raised his right. In less than a minute more both were on the rug.

"Now you're pinned. Give up?"

"No. It's not fair. I am not fighting you."

"I win!"

Susan stood up, pulled back her long blond hair and headed for her room.

"We did you let her do that?" Ronnie asked, concerned.

"Cause when you get to be my age, you don't fight with girls."

"But you used to."

"That was when I was younger."

Ned went to his room and sat down at the table. He pretended to study, but he could think of nothing but what had just happened. He was aroused and he was mortified. Not because of his boner of course, it was normal for his age, but because of his defeat. He could feel the pressure in his penis. Why had he let her pin him? She caught him by surprise, though. He should have thrown her off, but then
she and Ronnie would have known that she had had him trapped earlier. And now it seemed they really believed this bullshit about him not fighting a girl.

In his memory he could still smell her. He tightened his buttocks thinking of her
fingers sliding over his ass hole. And she had spanked him. He could feel his
embarrassment as the blood suffused his face and the sweat broke out. "Oh, it
was awful, awful, awful." What if someone heard of it? All he could say was,
"I wouldn't fight her because she is a girl." Why was she getting to him? Why
was he so hard? He wanted to wrestle her, to feel her body against his. Ned
was more miserable than ever before in his life.

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The word is spelled, buttocks
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The word is spelled, buttocks
Yeah, thank you, I corrected it. Counselor spelled the word like this in his story. BTW I wonder, where is he from? Maybe English is not his 1st language either.

Too bad he stopped writing years ago, I want him back on DTV
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Yes!

Your work with this story over the Russian forum is so amazing that, even though I do not understand Russian, I have been going there from time to time just to see if you have updated the story. Then I read it through google translate. )

It is great news that you are translating the story, but please do not stop updating the original thread over there as well.
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Great story, is there a continuation, in English?
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Great story, is there a continuation, in English?
Not yet, coming soon, probably in 1-3 days
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Looking forward to the next installment. Also please do updates to the Russian site as well?
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Episode 2. Susan Ascending 98.

As the days went by, Ned's normal happy frame of mind returned for most of the time, but he continued to have moments of despair as he thought of his defeat and moments of arousal as he thought of how their bodies had been locked together as she held him. He was more aware of her now as a young woman with breasts. Neither Ronnie nor Susan had said anything about the episode. Ned knew that he had to fight her. There was nothing else but to show her and himself that he was the better, but he did not want Ronnie there and Ronnie was always around.

Susan also had mixed feelings. Wrestling with Ned and running her hand over him had been very stimulating. It gave her what she came to call "the feeling." In her imagination she could still feel her legs around him and frequently, just before she dropped off to sleep, she locked her ankles, just as she had that night. She moved her hand as though running her fingers between his buttocks. Someone had goosed her once and she had not liked it and would never let anyone do that to her, but Ned had not resisted even that. Her reverie aroused strong emotions, emotions tinged with excitement, danger and a vague sense of wrongdoing.

And now let’s look back in time and see, how did our characters come to this.

In the first volume of this story we left them in autumn 1997. Susan started her 5th grade at the time, and Ned started his 7th. Girls’ average height was now several cm bigger than boys’ in his seventh grade. Some girls were taller than any boy and combative enough to beat them all. As Ned remembered, girls’ growth spurt started during their 5th grade, and they caught up boys in 6th on the average, and started to overtake them. But now Susan went to her 5th grade too, and Ned started to notice her fast growth as well! Furthermore, Susan was the tallest girl in her grade and Ned was a medium-sized boy.

Year ago, in the 1st volume (prequel for this story), Susan was 10.5 y.o., 147cm, and 34kg. Ned was slightly older than 12, 156cm and 41kg. Their 9cm difference was significant! But now, a year later, Ned reached 160cm and Susan added 8 centimeters, overtook all boys in her grade, and reached 155cm! The first time in their life their Big Brother – little sister difference decreased very significantly. Very tiny 5 centimeters are not the same as 9cm year ago and 11 cm two years ago. Susan became also the strongest pupil in her grade. She didn’t lost fights to any classmate, thanks to her Big Brother’s training.

Their weight difference also became minimal – 42kg Susan and 45 Ned.

All past year, relations between siblings were the same, as I described in the first volume. Ned trained his sister, they secretly wrestled a lot. Big Brother was always stronger. Susan executed “The Agreement” and did all his chores at home, in gratitude. Sometimes Susan sat astride little Ronny nightly, in their bedroom, and Big Bro was peeping through the door crack. By the way, little Ronny was even more behind the sister in height and weight this year. The difference has become simply unattainable. He went to the 3rd grade, and now he actually, besides Big Brother, has got a Big Sister.

This order of things lasted until May 1998, when another event happened.

-You know what, - Susan stated then, - I think, it’s time to terminate “The Agreement”
-Why? – Ned asked, although he expected for this to happen.
-I don't want to be your vassal anymore
-Why? - Ned repeated, although he knew the answer.
-I don’t need you as Master anymore. You have taught me all things you know. You shouldn’t train me anymore. And I won’t do your chores.

It was true. Just a year ago, Ned's advantage was undeniable. But their conditions became closer and closer this year.

-I no longer want to pay for the right to fight with you, - Susan continued. – Now if I need, I’ll start the fight. You’ll wrestle with me anyway.

Big Brother had to agree. Since that day, equality has been established in their relations. You can say, it is normal and the only reasonable way between siblings. And you are right, but remember, this has never happened before in the Walter family. Just two years ago, Ned was like mini-father for kids, and he was stronger than Susan and Ronny together! Now only Ronnie was considered a “real” kid. Susan was still riding him during the day, sitting astride him nightly, trained all sorts of holds on him – when the parents didn’t see, and Ned (as if) didn’t see.

For this year, by the summer 1998, Susan’s arms increased from 60% to 80% of Ned’s arms in circumference, due to her permanent trainings and her growth spurt. Her legs increased from 2/3 to 90% of Ned’s. Big Bro couldn’t beat Susan’s both arms with only his right arm in armwrestling anymore, as he did in 1996. He had to wrestle arm vs arm now, and even then serious efforts were needed to win.

So, in this state, Susan went to 6th grade, and Ned to 8th. They were 11.5 and 13 y.o. respectively. The prologue describes some events in the end of the summer. And the first chapter describes some things in September.

He had to do something with all these things, Ned thought.
Ned had to show both his sister and himself that he was better. Much better.
And it is necessary that Ron was not there.
He got his chance couple of weeks later, in October.

Episode 3. Chance for revenge.

Springfield, Missouri
October 7, 1998, Wednesday.


It was a good day in early October. Our heroes returned from school, had lunch and went to their rooms. The heat was above 20 degrees Celsius. Early October in Missouri is still summer by the standards of some countries.

Ned had few homework today, he did it all fast and sat down to read Jules Verne, a book from the library. Yeah, those kids of 1990s were quite different from present facebook generation. The TV in the corner mumbled something at a quiet volume. Leafing through the pages, Ned had time to hear very bad news from all over the world. They said something about mass strikes in Yeltsin’s Russia, he often heard incomprehensible words like "devaluation" and "default". What could it be? Well, these Russians always have some problems in the country. Somewhere in Africa, a plane crashed with dozens of passengers. The search for debris is hampered by jungles and civil wars in them. Well, these Africans have always even more problems than Russians have. Beloved America is the only peaceful and quite place. God bless America! Wait, oh shit. The brutal murder of a high school student in the west of the country. They say, the guy was killed by his friend from the same school. Why did he do it, Ned wondered. And now, not far from here, the girl left house and didn’t return home in St Louis. They show a portrait. It’s all in vain, Ned thought. Most likely, they will not find her. Surely she is already at the bottom of the Mississippi. In the spring they will find her blue corpse somewhere in the beach in New Orleans. Or maybe, alligators will find it before.

Mom returned from work early today, and she led Ronny to the doctor – the boy had a toothache. Dad went on a business trip to Jefferson City. This is such a tiny boring town a hundred miles away, the capital of their state. Ned and Susan were home alone. What to do now? A sudden thought flashed in the head and his heart raced. Ned got up from the couch and headed to his sister's room.

Susan was sitting at her desk doing arithmetic. Ned came up behind her and tipped back her chair. He held the chair for a moment and then let the back of it down to the rug. Big Brother caught her by surprise! Poor Susan didn’t even notice him. Before she could get up, Ned was on top of her. The two struggled, Ned trying to hold her down, Susan trying to escape. As they rolled this way and that, Susan managed to raise herself by holding on to the seat of the chair. Then she twisted and Ned lost his grip.

In an instant she had turned on her unbalanced brother pushing him on his back. Now Susan was on top trying to pin him. Pin him! She quickly concentrated. She liked to wrestle. They both were breathing heavly, she leaned over him, the guy looks up at her, he sees determination in his rival’s eyes. Ned felt fear surging through him as he struggled to free himself. Susan tried to sit on him so that she could put pressure on his shoulders. It was a mistake. Ned rolled on his front and, pulling his knees underneath him, managed to shake free of her.

Both scrambled to their feet and faced each other. There was no charade now about not fighting. The boy and the girl were ready to give their all. To an outsider Ned would seem to have the advantage. At 160 cm he was 5 cm taller than Susan and outweighed her by 3 kilos, but she soon proved to be the quicker.

Ned tried for a headlock, but Susan pulled free, slid behind him and locked her arms around his chest. She tried to throw him and then to trip him, but he managed to stay on his feet. After several tries she got the throw and the trip timed and down he went prone with Susan on top. She tried to turn him over on to his back, but he squirmed away. It was quite difficult for her. She tried again and again. Both were tiring now. Ned tried to get to his knees, but she moved her body across him with all her weight on his upper back, his shoulders and his head, her arms wrapped around his neck and left shoulder. "The feeling" was strong now. She rubbed her breasts against his back and then squeezed him harder.

They lay that way for a while, Ned trapped and unable to move and Susan not knowing how to take advantage of her position. Ned, who had been too busy to think of Susan as a girl, now began to experience again the close presence of a girl's body against his and the tightness of her arms. His member stiffened. This was not good. He was afraid that Susan would notice it.

"Enough for now. I have to cut the grass." he said. "We've roughhoused a little and neither of us got pinned."

Susan released her grip and sat up breathing hard. They sat there disheveled and sweaty, recovering from the exertion and from the emotions that gripped them.

As the weeks went by both youngsters longed for another go, but both had reservations. Upmost in Susan's mind was the exhilaration of holding her own against her big brother, the temptation of "the feeling" and the thrill of danger offset by a not-so-vague sense that she was doing something wrong. Ned, also, wanted the closeness, the straining of body against body, but he was worried about something else. His younger sister was better than he wanted to believe and had proved she could more than held her own. She was good. He had to admit it, not better than he certainly, but what if she beat him? What if
his parents heard about it? What if Susan told? What if Ronnie knew that he had been unable to beat her up? He was nervous.

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Episode 4. Afflatus.

Springfield, Missouri
November 1, 1998, Sunday.


About a month later, when they were home alone, Ned was walking along the corridor and Susan appeared in front of him. She got very close to him. She was now almost the same size as him, only 5 cm shorter. She liked that she no longer needed to raise her head high to look at Big Brother. Susan looked calmly into his eyes, blocking his way, realizing that she is almost as strong as him. Ned tried to get around her, but she moved in parallel. Her belly pressed against his stomach, her tiny breasts pressed against his chest just below his nipples. She still looked him straight in the eyes defiantly. Susan brushed against Ned and then pushed him playfully. When he pushed back she said, "Watch out, or I'll pin you."

Ned felt a tightening in his abdomen. He did not understand whether it was caused by the anticipation of a struggle or fear. He also felt stiffening in his crotch. "Watch out or I'll pin you." He was already breathing hard.

They closed, locking arms, trying to force each other, to gain an advantage. Ned reached for a headlock. He got his arm around her neck, but she pivoted so that he had no leverage. She countered by wrapping her arm around his neck as they both struggled for leverage. She got her right leg in front of his left, thereby gaining enough leverage to bring his head down. He pulled backwards, but she held on twisting.

Ned reached down and pulled up her foot. Down they went, Ned still trapped in Susan's headlock. She applied pressure with all her strength, twisting his neck and forcing him over on his back. He thrashed but could not free himself. He tried to pry apart her hands, but he could not get his hands in good position. She moved higher along him for better position and her grip became indestructible. Held like this with his face pressing into her breast was arousing. He felt a throbbing in his penis.

"I win!"

"I'm not pinned." (There were a few centimeters to the floor)

"You can't get away."

"You haven't pinned me."

"Give up."

"Are you kidding?"

She twisted further trying to get her weight on his shoulders. She shifted this way and that, several minutes passed, but the girl could not bring both shoulders to the rug at the same time. Ned felt her breast rub against his face. Aroused but unable to break free, he concentrated on keeping both shoulders off the rug. He would not let his sister win this fight no matter what. "The feeling" was strong in Susan.
She noted an unwonted stirring between her legs.

Alarmed by her own emotions, she broke off, rose to her knees brushing back her hair. Ned sat up, breathing heavily, pretending to be fresh, looking at her, knowing she had nearly beaten him, but strangely aroused, wanting to wrestle his body against hers again.

"We're pretty evenly matched," he said and was immediately ashamed of his duplicity.

But Susan took his remark as a compliment. "Do you think so? I've never pinned you except once when you weren't fighting. I never know if you're trying your hardest."

"Well, I don't always try my hardest," he muttered, blushing in shame at his lie.

Susan looked at him. For the first time it occurred to her that maybe she really was more than just lucky, maybe he was really trying as hard as he could, maybe she was better than he was, maybe she could beat him if she really tried.

“I’m cool”, Susan pondered, inflamed, lying in her bed at night, “I’m incredibly cool! This is unthinkable, but it seems I am getting better than Big Brother! I almost caught him up in height and weight, I am better than him in dexterity and speed; so it is possible to beat him up! It’s so great! I will try my best, but I’ll definitely do it!!” Her stirring became stronger and stronger.

Needless to say, Big Brother’s mood was quite the opposite.

1.2. BALANCE OF POWER.
Episode 1. Real defeat.

Springfield, Missouri
November – December 1998


Over the next two months, until the New Year, they wrestled at least every few days and occasionally two or even three days in a row. Susan was always the instigator, always when no one else was home. Ned tried to start a match a couple of times, but it did not work unless Susan was ready. She would just turn away and say something like, "I'm busy." Something changed in their relations; Big Brother’s leadership, even informal, dissolved without trace. Only when Susan had "the feeling" would she wrestle.

She had noticed Ned's hardness and his way of drawing up his knees to hide it. Or sometimes he turned away or turned over on his stomach. Susan already understood guys’ anatomy and she was amused. She knew that any girl’s presence could cause boy’s hard-on; especially girl’s close presence in wrestling. She liked that she could bring it on. And she liked how Ned was embarrassed and how he suffered trying to hide it. Moreover, it reduced his maneuverability and it helped her. Susan was becoming more agile and skillful in their battles. Sometimes she deliberately prevented the guy from raising his knees, so that he couldn’t hide the bulge. He was distracted by unnecessary actions and wasted his energy.

The matches were different now. Susan was on the attack trying for the pin which to her meant victory. Ned never turned down her invitations even when he wished he could, for he did not want her to think that he was afraid of her.

He both longed for and dreaded their battles. They were very sexy (He used that word now to himself.), but he feared being pinned, especially by the younger girl. Neither of them knew much about wrestling holds; so they improvised as they went along. Susan had become the better wrestler; she was on top most of the time, but did not know how to complete the pin. Although, as she became more skillful, she came increasingly close to winning. A couple of times in December when he thought she might get him, Ned escaped by making excuses to stop the fight.

Finally, on December 20th, closer to Christmas, it happened. Susan had thrown Ned onto his back. She was laying on the side, along him, firmly holding her hands around his neck. Ned started to get a hard-on. Susan pretended she noticed nothing. Embarrassed boy started to raise his knees to hide it, but Susan didn’t let him. She stretched her leg across his knees and started to press them down to the floor. Ned was extremely embarrassed but he could do nothing. Susan's face was right above him, she looked into his eyes, his panic emotions amused her to the extreme. She still pretended she noticed nothing. Desperately, Ned tried to raise his knees again, but in her good position, holding his neck with her hands, the girl had enough leverage to block his attempts efficiently. As soon as he raised them a bit, she made him to straighten his legs, pressing them down forcefully with her right leg. She looked down at him in complete dominance.

When he tried to roll over on his stomach, she maneuvered her body across his so that she was over his upper body with her left arm around his neck and her right arm through his crotch and around his left leg. It was a very good hold that she had achieved partly because she wanted to feel her arm against his hardness. As it was Ned was trapped. She put all her weight on his shoulders. He kept up first one and then the other, but he was tiring.

"Wait. I forgot I was supposed to make a phone call," he lied.

Susan did not reply, she just smiled, for she now recognized his excuses. As she kept up the pressure, fear seized Ned. He strained with all of his might. Now both shoulders were up. Their bodies strained against each other. Neither moved. Thirty seconds, forty-five seconds, sixty seconds. Nothing happened. Then, all at once, his shoulders went down. He raised them again. Ten seconds, fifteen seconds and then they went down again. Once more he raised them, but it was all he could do. They went down for good. Susan held him for several moments more and then got up. She had achieved her long sought goal.

–I win! – She cried, standing over him, raising her arms in triumph.

Ned sat up on the floor.
–You had a good hold, – he said. – I shouldn't have let you get it, – and he blushed again with his own lies.

–Enough of this lies! – Susan was indignant, looking down at him. – You didn't let anything. I beat you myself in a fair fight. Or maybe you will say that you are not fighting with girls? – She grinned.

Ned was silent and depressed. All his tricks were revealed.

–Admit that I beat you in a fair fight, – Susan demanded.
Ned kept silence.
–Or do you want to continue? Maybe you want to prove the opposite? – She giggled.
–Well, OK, – Ned mumbled. – You won.
It was the worst thing he ever said in his life!

Susan smiled at him radiantly, happy in the knowledge of her victory.

Ned tossed and turned that night. He felt nervous and very unhappy; sleep was far away. The more he thought about the last match, the worse he felt. What had he been doing, wrestling a girl anyway? It hadn't really been a fair match. He had been too aroused. What should he do? He would like to pin her; he imagined doing so, but he was not totally unrealistic. What if she pinned him again? What would he say then? He thought of her smile. He thought about her dominant face just above him. That bitch, she had started it. Why did she want to try to be better than her brother?
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Default Re: Susan vs Ned - Extended Story

So I see the “Susan” topics have been removed from the Russian forum.

Please, V V P (Valeron), I encourage you to keep writing this story here, BOTH IN ENGLISH AND IN RUSSIAN if you will (the Russian version was significantly advanced as I last remember).
It is always a pleasure reading your stories, especially this one.
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