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Old 13-Mar-14, 16:05
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Default The new white belt - a slim guy begins to train karate

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original by A.J. Brown

Weak guy signs up for a martial arts class and quickly meets a new friend


Eric is 21 years old and recently breaking up with his girlfriend whom he had been dating for five months was rough on him. He was a slim Italian guy with tan skin and a good looking face. He was about five point six feet tall and weighed just a bit less than 130 pounds. he was handsome but he was also somewhat insecure and extremely shy. he was very timid about talking to anyone that he didnt knew so even though girl where interested , his shyness would make them think that they should look elsewhere. That was a big reason that breaking up with his most recent girlfriend, Jenny, was such a blow to him.

She left him saying she wnted someone more fun , and now he didn't know if he'd ever find a girl again!

At a pizza place one day, Eric saw a flyer posted on the bulletin board for a karate class. Sensei Paul was running the class and the advertisement said he was accepting all styles and all skill levels. Eric always thought it might be cool to learn karate. As he was a pretty small guy he thought he could definitely use it. And it also might be a good chance for him to meet some girs in a comfortable environment. he spoke to Sensei Paul on the phone and he sounded like a nice man. He gave him instructions to go to a martial arts store to pick up a gi since gis were required attire in his dojo. He told her that his white belt would be provided for him and the first class and told him when and where to go.

he showed up at the first class and saw that Sensei Paul was a big guy. He stood at close to 6'5 and although he was somewhat thin he looked like he weighed close to 230. He looked to be in his mid-forties but he was a good looking guy and seemed to be in great shape. He gave him some brief instruction but then basically told him to warm-up for the few minutes before class started. Everyone would do warm-ups together, when they did kata he would have a black belt work with her individually to teach her him first kata, and then at the end they would all spar together. The idea of sparring on him first day scared him but he told him he could just watch that if he wanted to.

Eric stood in the dojo stretching a little bit and observed everyone else that was warming up. he was definitely a bit intimidated by everyone as he looked around. It was mainly guys that were in this class and none of them seemed to notice him. The majority of them had black belts while only a few had brown, red, or green belts on. Eric didn't see anyone else wearing a white belt other than him and that made him feel a bit uncomfortable.

There was only one girl in the class and she did look to be about Erics age.
She looked about his size, but she was a very nerdy looking girl. She had blond hair that was in a ponytail and a pair of very nerdy looking glasses on. he saw her smile and her smile was very nerdy looking as well - it kind of looked like she had buckteeth. This nerdy, young looking girl was wearing a black belt however.

"Oh hi" the nerdy girl said with a smile as she walked over to Eric "You must be new in the class."

"Yeah" Eric said and he gave her a shy smile back.
"I'm Geraldine" the nerdy girl said to her and she held out her hand for Eric to shake. "Nice to meet you."
"Nice to meet you" Eric said as she shook her hand.
"Wow, you have a firm handshake" Geraldine said, still with a friendly smile on her face. Eric appreciated her noticing that. he was a shy guy but his dad told him that if he had a firm handshake that people would take that as her having a good personality.

"It's good to have person in my age in the class with me, the other guys here are older." Geraldine said as she put her hands on her hips.

"Many newcomers don't last unfortunately. Sensei Paul runs a tough class but it's a good one. And some of the guys here look kind of mean but they're all real nice. And the good news is that we know karate too just in case they do get out of line, ha-ha-ha. How old are you?"

"I'm 21" he said still speaking softly. "How old are you?"
"24" Geraldine said to her to his surprise.
"Wow" Angie said.
"Yeah, I know" Geraldine laughed. "I look more like I'm your age, people tell me that all of the time."
"Well it's good to look young" Eric said trying to be polite.
"I see you got your gi already" Geraldine said. "Yeah" Eric said back, never being much of the conversationalist.
"Only downside is that Sensei won't let us wear any kinds of shoes, not even sports shoes" Geraldine said as she looked at Angie's bare feet. "The gi hides the rest of our body pretty well You have pretty feet, though."

"Thank you" Eric said and he gave her, his biggest smile yet. Eric actually liked that compliment.

"Everyone line up!" Sensei Paul then said with a loud, commanding voice that carried throughout the dojo and scared Eric a little bit
. "Get towards the back right corner of the dojo" Geraldine said to him softly. "We line up in order and that's where you will stand since you are the lowest rank. And make sure you stand up straight. Sensei HATES it when you don't."

Eric started to walk to his spot and sped up a little bit when he saw the urgency that everyone else was walking with. They all had very serious looks on her their faces and Eric was sure to stand up as straight as possible just like Geraldine had said - he was afraid not to. "Bend down in a squatting stance" Sensei Paul said to the class. "Get as low as you can - if you can't feel the burn you're not low enough. Shake your wrists out." Eric looked at all of the other students squat so low that they were in a seated position but he couldn't get anywhere near that low without it causing him too much pain. he felt embarrassed that he was about half as low as everyone else and even that hurt so he would inch up even a bit more every minute or so. They did some other stretching exercises to get the class going.

"Everyone on the ground on your backs" Sensei then said and Eric was definitely glad to get a break from standing up. "Lift your legs six inches off of the ground. Leg lifts. Stay with the count. One, two, three?"

Eric had never done these before and even after the first three they were wearing him out. They were hurting his quads and hurting his abs as well. he figured that they'd probably do twenty of these but he didn't think that he was going to even make it that far. "21, 22, 23?" Sensei Paul continued to count. Class had still just started so even though this was exercise was extremely tiring and painful for Eric , he pushed with everyone he could to try to keep doing the leg lifts. he didn't want to give up on an exercise this early and look like a wimp. He hoped that he would stop them at thirty but he kept going. At 32 leg lifts Eric had to stop because his body just couldn't take it anymore. It definitely embarrassed him when he looked at everyone else in the class still able to do them, including Geraldine who seemed to be having no trouble with them whatsoever. Sensei didn't stop at 40 either and Eric wondered when he was going to stop. When he got to 50 he kept going and then a few other guys ended up stopping as well. "Come on guys" Sensei said as the rest of the class continued to do their legs lifts.
"You've got Geraldine making you look bad here like usual." Angie watched Geraldine continue to do the leg lifts and even when they got over sixty she was still doing them with no problem. Geraldine was a black belt and this was Eric's first day of class. But these were just leg lifts, not some karate move, and it made Eric feel embarrassed that a girl that was close to her size was that much more physically capable than he was.

"Eighty" Sensei Paul said then he finally stopped the count. "Now everyone get a partner about your size for wheelbarrows."
Geraldine immediately looked right at Eric with a smile like the two of them were going to be partners. Even though he hadn't actually ever done them before, he knew what wheelbarrows were so he was glad he could partner with someone his size and not have to hold some big guy's legs as he moved around the room.

"I'll go first" Geraldine said and then she got on the ground. "Hold my legs." Geraldine started getting in a pushup position and Eric lifted Geraldine's legs off of the ground in a wheelbarrow position. Her legs felt much heavier and stronger than Eric would have expected from a small girl. Geraldine started quickly moving around the room and just holding her legs was wearing Eric out once again. Geraldine was moving quickly as she did the wheelbarrow exercise and it was very difficult for Eric to keep up with her as he held her strong legs. He had an upset look on his face as he tried to hold onto Geraldine's legs as they moved across the dojo.

"OK your turn" Geraldine said as she stood up after doing her wheelbarrow around the entire perimeter of the dojo. Eric got down and got himself into a pushup position. His upper body was not very strong and he could barely do ten pushups so he didn't know how he was going to be able to do this. She felt Geraldine easily lift his legs up off of the ground and it seemed as his legs weren't as heavy to Geraldine as Geraldine's were to him. Eric started to do the wheelbarrow and he could barely walk on his hands at all. He watched as the other guys in the class were all moving by him going extremely fast while he felt like he was going to fall over.

He started to whine a little bit and he had no choice but to fall to the ground, only making it a few steps.
"Don't worry about it" Geraldine said as she helped Eric to his feet. "Those are hard the first time. Get back in line now."
Eric then looked to see that everyone else had completed their wheelbarrows and were all lined up again just waiting for them two. It embarrassed Eric having them all looking at him and he quickly got back to his spot in the dojo, looking at the ground as he did.
"Get back in your stances as low as you can do" Sensei said to them. "Put your right arm out in a punch stance. One, two, three?" He counted as everyone in the class was doing punches and even though all they were doing was punching the air, the pace that they were doing it at was tiring Eric out. This was really too much for him and he wondered if he had made a mistake by joining this class. They then did the same thing with kicks and Eric was struggling mightily to keep up.
"Get on the ground in a pushup position" Sensei said to the class. "Make sure every one of you is on your knuckles and not your palms. If you can't do the pushups then just stay on your knuckles in the pushup position in place. Don't cheat. Ready. One, two, three?"
Eric couldn't even do one knuckle pushup and he actually felt like he was going to cry because it was so difficult. Sensei continued to count but Eric couldn't even hold himself in the pushup position on his knuckles. He was not nearly strong enough so he had to lie on his stomach as he watched everyone else in the class do twenty of them. As he watched he saw that Geraldine was actually doing the pushups on her palms. Eric would have tried it that way if he knew it was allowed.
"Everyone now get in a plank position and hold it" Sensei said. Eric then watched as everyone else was holding themselves up using their forearms, elbows, and feet. He got in the plank position as well and he didn't want to fail at this like he did with the pushups. But Sensei was making them stay like that forever and he felt like he was going to fall flat on his face. He could feel himself sweating and he really wanted to cry. "Stay in that position" Sensei said to everyone. "Tree climbers. One, two, three?" Eric watched as everyone else in the class remained in the plank position and started moving their legs up to touch their knees to their elbows. Sensei was counting extremely fast and Eric could not keep up. Just lying in the plank position using his thin arms and his toes to hold himself up was difficult enough without having to do the tree climber exercise on top of it.

he just could not keep up anymore. They were only fifteen minutes in
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Old 13-Mar-14, 16:11
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he just could not keep up anymore. They were only fifteen minutes in to this ninety minute class and his untrained body already couldn't take another second of it. He stood up, ran into the corner of the room, and sat down trying his best not to start crying. Geraldine saw Eric in the corner and she immediately got up to go over and check on him. The rest of the class continued and didn't pay any attention to them. Eric saw the look of concern that was on Geraldine's face as she came closer to him and that upset even more for some reason.

"You OK?" Geraldine asked her and Eric just nodded . "I'll get you a cup of water." Eric watched Geraldine go over to the water cooler, pour her a cup of water, and bring it back to him. He definitely welcomed the drink and that water tasted good. Geraldine sat next to him instead of just going back to join the class and Eric appreciated the support his new friend was giving him.

"Don't worry about it" Geraldine said. "There's only fifteen more minutes of this stuff and then we'll do kata. Just hang out and relax and I'll personally teach you your first kata myself, OK?" Eric nodded and Geraldine gave him a cute smile. Eric sat there drinking his water and his body still felt extremely worn out from the fifteen minutes of warm ups. Geraldine went back to join the class and continued with the warm ups. For a small girl she sure seemed tough. "I'll work on kata with Eric over in the corner over here" Geraldine said to Sensei Paul when it came time for that
"Make sure you work on his stances with him too" Sensei said back. "It's all about stances." "Alright, so we'll work on some pivoting and stances before we actually get into the kata" Geraldine said as Sensei Paul walked away.

"In order to do this kata correctly you'll need to be able to start in a block stance and then pivot into a punch stance. Like this."
Eric watched as Geraldine squatted down into a perfect seated position without sitting on anything and she put her hands on her hips. Eric started to get down low like that but, once again, he couldn't get anywhere near that low without really feeling a painful burn in his thighs. He started to get another upset look on his face.
"It's OK, it takes time, just go as low as you can for now" Geraldine said. "Then the key is to pivot into a punching stance where your front leg is bent so your knee makes it so you can't see your foot, and your back leg is locked. While you're pivoting you don't want your head to go up too high and you don't want your shoulders to swing too much. It's all in your hips. Like this."

Eric observed Geraldine pivoting and as good as she looked doing it, all Eric could feel was jealousy as he watched. Geraldine had a perfect stance and Eric was extremely impressed with the way she was able to remain in such a perfect seated position in the air. It had hurt Eric just being in that position for a few seconds and Geraldine was pivoting back and forth like that with no problem. They continued to work on pivoting with Geraldine having Eric practice as well. Geraldine was being extremely nice and patient with him as she attempted to teach him but Eric didn't feel like he was learning much - he just felt like he was watching Geraldine do things with his body that he wasn't good enough to do.

They weren't getting into kata at all and Eric was finding the pivoting very boring as well. "Alright, everyone get your sparring gear on" Sensei Paul called out to the class after they had done a half hour of kata. "It's time to spar."

"I don't have any sparring gear" Eric said quietly to Geraldine and he really wouldn't have wanted to spar even if he did.
"I got extra stuff you can wear" Geraldine said. "No" Eric said to her.
"You don't want to spar?" Geraldine asked and Angie shook her head.
"That's OK. Sensei will want you to do it eventually but you don't have to your first class. You can just watch this time."

Eric went back to the corner and watched as the students paired up for sparring. All the guys grabbed a partner and Geraldine couldn't seem to find one. Eric figured they were all avoiding partnering up with

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Rest of the story commin soon
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So far so good, can't wait for more.
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This story can go in so many directions. I'm anxious to see which way you take it.
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Eric went back to the corner and watched as the students paired up for sparring. All the guys grabbed a partner and Geraldine couldn't seem to find one. Eric figured they were all avoiding partnering up with her since she was a girl and she didn't like that. It was typical obnoxious guy behavior. Everyone found a partner except for Geraldine and some guy who had a red belt. The guy seemed like he was not interested in partnering with Geraldine even though he was about a foot taller than she was. He realized he wasn't going to have a choice and reluctantly partnered up with her.

"Bow to your partner" Sensei said to all of the students. "Go!" Everyone was spread out throughout the dojo sparring with each other but the only match Eric was interesting in watching was the one between Geraldine and the red belt. Geraldine was much smaller than the guy so Eric didn't think she stood a chance but he quickly learned otherwise. Geraldine had looked good doing her karate during the class but her sparring was something amazing. She was going at this guy with punches and kicks with such speed and skill and he was helpless against her. He was trying his best just to defend himself and she quickly trapped him in the corner. The sparring continued and even after Geraldine let the red belt out of the corner he still couldn't do anything against her. It went on for three minutes and he looked relieved when they were finally done. They found new partners and this time Geraldine partnered up with a black belt. The black belt was even taller than the red belt but he looked a lot stronger as well. His sleeves were rolled up and Eric could see the veins bulging in his arms. He looked like he could break Geraldine in half with his bare hands if he wanted. Eric would not ever want to have to spar against him even if it was minimal contact. Sensei Paul signaled for them to begin and this black belt was giving Geraldine much more trouble than the red belt was. He was stronger and more skilled and she couldn't connect on anything she was throwing.

But she also had great defense and she was blocking everything he threw at her as well. They were having a really good match and Eric actually watched it with curiosity. The guy had strength and size but Geraldine had speed and skill. Neither of them seemed able to connect on anything because of the other's great defense and he wondered if either of them would at all during their match. Geraldine then jumped in the air and did some crazy looking spinning back kick. Her heel hit the guy right underneath his eye and he went to the ground. The big guy hitting the ground like that made a loud 'thud' which got everyone else's attention and they all stopped fighting. With a concerned look on her face, Geraldine got on her knees right next to him to see if he was OK. "Oh my God" she said and she had a look of genuine concern in her eyes that made Eric think she didn't do it on purpose. "I'm so sorry. It was an accident, I swear."

"What happened?" Sensei said as she went over to them. "I'm sorry" Geraldine said and she definitely looked genuinely upset about what she had done as the black belt lay on the ground.
"I did my jump spinning back kick and tried not to hit him too hard. But the back of my heel hit him right in the face."

"Gotta work on that one with you a little bit" Sensei said with a smile. "Just gotta get your control down a little bit better. But your kick is obviously powerful. I'll make sure Frank is OK. The rest of you continue. Nothing to see here." Geraldine looked at Frank one more time with concern but then everyone cleared away to find new partners. Everyone was still trying to avoid having Geraldine as a partner and now Eric was sure that it had nothing to do with her being a girl - they were all just afraid of her. Eric watched the class find different partners for three minutes of sparring a piece for the rest of the class. Geraldine seemed like she was trying extra hard not to hurt her opponent again but they all seemed timid to get too close and risk getting hurt. No one was keeping score or anything but just from Eric's observation it was clear that Geraldine defeated each one of her opponents. "Alright, everyone line up for breathing" Sensei said at the end of class. Everyone got back to their spots they were standing at, at the beginning of class and when Eric stayed in the corner Sensei motioned for him to come out to his spot. They all sat down, closed their eyes, and breathed.

Now in this relaxed position, Eric realized not only how worn out he was but how sore his body was as well.
"Relax" Sensei Paul said and everyone opened their eyes. "Bow out. Eric, I'd like to thank you for joining our school. I hope you enjoyed this class and I hope to see you next week."

"Come on" Geraldine said and she walked towards Eric while all of the guys started to disperse.
"Let's go to the locker room to get changed. We only have one locker room here, i show you where it is. " Geraldine led Eric into the locker room which was big and very clean

Once they got in there, Geraldine took off the top half of her gi and Eric was amazed. Geraldine wasn't lying when she said the gis covered up their bodies well. Geraldine had a tank top on and her upper body was absolutely incredible. Her arms and shoulders looked extremely athletic and even kind of strong for such a small girl. She also had much bigger boobs than Eric ever would have thought a small, petite girl like her would have had and the tight tank top really showed them off. Eric had a hard time not to stare .
"How are you feeling?" Geraldine asked Eric with a smile.

"Tired" Eric said back. "And really sore."

"Ha-ha-ha," Geraldine laughed. "I bet you are. This was your first class and that one's always the toughest. Just wait until tomorrow, though. You're going to be really sore."

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Am loving this.
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Great stuff! Hope to see the next chapter soon
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