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But then again, there's a lot of things that I find a turn-off which a lot of people here love - I avoid the entire female domination section of this forum because it's almost entirely stuff I'm not interested in and often can't see why anyone else is. But hey, I don't have to look at it, and people who like it can have their fun. |
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Harry Potter would, in my opinion, be an extremely, extremely poor choice. And yet I've seen choices just that poor. I mean, I've read mixed wrestling Popeye fanfic. Popeye! What the hell? |
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Otherwise fierce fisticuff fighting spoiled by referencing sexual arousal/gratification in the midst of it.
"Kelly peppered my face with a barrage of punches; left, right, left. In a state of humiliation, shame and semi-consciousness, I felt my cock stiffen. Finally, Kelly kicked up high, her bare foot crashed into my face, breaking my jaw and sent me crashing to the ground. I jizzed in my shorts as my brain shut down, unconscious from her punishing fists and feet." I see this a lot and it just doesn't work for me. It makes a realistic story unrealistic and completely spoils it. Someone, in such a situation would NOT jizz themselves. It's just the author projecting their own arousal at such a scenario and it doesn't need to be literally written into the story. The suffering and humiliation of the male is part of what makes it arousing. Being told he's getting off on it lessens his suffering and lessens my arousal. Yes, a girl kicking a guy's ass is arousing, we all get it. -- Names. Specifically really old-fashioned names for young characters in supposedly contemporary settings. "18 year old Barbara straddled her step brother Alf's chest and held his wrists to the floor. Suddenly, his best friend Arthur burst into the room to save him, but was intercepted by Maude. Meanwhile, Marilyn held Walt down as well." If this is set in 1930, please reference that fact, otherwise posting this in the 21st century just seems wrong, out of touch and makes the reading experience again, unrealistic and uneasy/difficult to imagine. Ok, there are some young people with old-fashioned names; you can have an Arthur or a Marilyn - no explanation needed - young people with these names do exist, but every character in a story? No. Last edited by jiminy; 11-Jan-16 at 06:39. |
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Why are so many stories about incest? I find it ... Freudian?
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Making the asshole the winner
Jenny grabbed her ex-husband, and threw him into the wall. "Now, hand over the money for the orphans." "NEVER!" "Then it looks like I'll have to break every bone in your body to get that money so I can use it to buy clothes and fancy cars." I don't want some asshole to win, it only makes me root for the nice person, and a lot of people make the women an asshole. It just seems like less Femdom, and more Evildom. Rape, Rape, and an extra side of Rape. Do I even have to tell a tale? No rape.
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Eh.
Points 2 and 3 are a matter of taste. The same goes for muscle, over sexuality and assholes. Some of these appeal, some don't, but each of them appeals to *someone*. Points 1 and 4 (and the names thing) are just shitty, shitty writing though and while it's right to call them out, given that most stories are written by total amateurs, its to be expected that the quality wont be all that... i just pass over them and am grateful for the good stuff. Stories about rape are pretty disgusting though and that's the thing that really makes me go "Who writes this crap?!" |
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