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Old 11-Jun-20, 02:33
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Default Re: "You may be the babysitter, but who's really in charge?"

What a gem, I must’ve missed this when you posted part 3. I’m glad I found it. I forgot all about little Eliza’s. This was a great story and very real like. Eliza’s was very proud of her victory while Liam was embarrassed and surprised of the power of a this young girl. You told a great story with a great battle. Thank you fir posting
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Old 11-Jun-20, 03:14
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I hope there is a rematch and hope her friend joins in
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Old 05-Nov-20, 05:56
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No offense but this sucked, there's suspension of disbelief and then having a fourth grader beating a college student. this is disgusting
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Old 05-Nov-20, 06:49
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Default Re: "You may be the babysitter, but who's really in charge?"

How many stories have you posted?
I'm thinking of stopping writing here because of so much criticism.
Will you be happy when there are no stories for you to find fault with?
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Old 05-Nov-20, 08:22
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No offense but this sucked, there's suspension of disbelief and then having a fourth grader beating a college student. this is disgusting
It's just fantasy.If you are offendet ,DO NOT read it.
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Old 05-Nov-20, 18:09
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How many stories have you posted?
I'm thinking of stopping writing here because of so much criticism.
Will you be happy when there are no stories for you to find fault with?
I know comments like the one above are discouraging, mate, and I am sorry you have been treated like that. All I can suggest is that people like him aren't the ones for whom you write stories. There are some who truly appreciate you sharing your imagination and writing talents. Thank you for sharing with us.
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Old 05-Nov-20, 21:06
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How many stories have you posted?
I'm thinking of stopping writing here because of so much criticism.
Will you be happy when there are no stories for you to find fault with?
idk why you're offended, this isn't your story. I'm a fan of lot of stories on this website, but if i don't like something why would I not share my opinion on it. I want to see storytelling improve as a whole and this isn't it chief.
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idk why you're offended, this isn't your story. I'm a fan of lot of stories on this website, but if i don't like something why would I not share my opinion on it. I want to see storytelling improve as a whole and this isn't it chief.
Different people like different things. No-one is under any obligation to write only stories which are to your taste. Saying about a story that it is "not my cup of tea" is one thing, but to call a fictional story "disgusting" is totally uncalled for. Also, please try to learn the difference between constructive and destructive criticism.

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Old 06-Nov-20, 00:04
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No offense but this sucked
Don't be insulted but I'm going to shit all over something you created and shared with us for free.

Pretty disrespectful, bro.
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Old 07-Nov-20, 06:21
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the story is about a 4th grader ... thats wrong, and if you can't see that then good luck
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