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Old 04-Nov-17, 02:11
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Default Re: My biggest pet peeves in m/f stories

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unfinished stories. And I know I am not a writer just an avid reader.
What kind of unfinished stories? The ongoing ones that still haven't been finished or the ones that are left to die?
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My pet peeve is simply reading stuff that doesn't make sense in reality. Like one series that's on here and originally elsewhere, where humans forgot how to have sex to make babies and a smart lady figures it out because 1 time she made a guy cream which made her get pregnant and she would get pregnant on command by making him cream again. Reality doesn't work like that.
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Old 05-Nov-17, 16:29
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The ones left to die
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Old 05-Nov-17, 16:47
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Crazy, unrealistic or fantasy world settings. Also those involving celebrities, just donít appeal to me. I try to keep mine realistic and properly paced.
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2. Bizarre fantasy settings.

Keylaria, the Elf Queen, sat upon her throne of troll bones. "Bring me the Cocks!" she ordered. Her gnome servants led four muscular orcs with giant dicks into the room on leashes. "Today I shall fight all you Cocks!" Keylaria announced. The orcs looked at each other. This three foot tall woman was challenging THEM and their enormous members?
Every time this thread pops up, number 2 makes me laugh so hard I cry.
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Every time this thread pops up, number 2 makes me laugh so hard I cry.
When fantasy goes bad...
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Fantasy or not, it's no excuse for not writing your best. Think what would happen if they had that attitude while making movies.
Oh, wait a minute, a lot of them do.
Well write your best anyway.
Maybe they are writing their best. They are putting down the words that describe their fantasy, not yours. Being a well-rounded writer is not an easy thing for some of us for whatever reason.

Like I said before. If you don't like it, just move on.
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Did I suggest writing was easy? Writing is work!

Nothing is wrong with constructive criticism, and everyone, including yours truly can improve. The sky is the limit, but there are people who are content to stay below sea level, quality wise. I've read stories from those who improved with each story, and it is a pleasure to see.

And yes, if I don't like it, I do move on. If I was only interested in my fantasies, I wouldn't be reading anyone elses'. That's the pleasure of reading.
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Default Re: My biggest pet peeves in m/f stories

I'll include constructive criticism and ways to correct in my 5 pet-peeves in hope that future writers see it and it is beneficial to them.

1) Forced sex/rape:
Should be self explanatory, but it occurs in way to many stories and really should be flagged. Its a huge turn-off whether its done by a guy OR girl. If one person doesn't agree to this before-hand, it isn't consensual and therefore is RAPE! The most common example on this site is when a girl has made a guy her slave (I'll get to that later) and fucks him whenever she pleases. The exception to this is a tournament or agreement before the match where all participants agree to forced sexual situations

2)Slave Owning Girls/Bullying/Assholes:
I love a friendly, competitive or semi-competitive, match between friends, bf and gf, or wrestling teammates. Why? Its friendly and everyone enjoys themselves for the most part. I think they are some of the best on this site. What I don't love is a girl ruining a guys life, making him do all her chores, overly-controlling, etc. Its a turn-off and makes me root for the guy.

3) Underage Sex (boyfriend/girlfriend relationship is the only exception):
This is complicated because everyone has varying opinions on whats to far and whats ok and almost all wrestling/grappling moves could be considered sexual to some degree. So when I write I use this rule of thumb. First, matches that include anyone under 18yrs old should be written so the age difference is 3yrs or less. Second, if one of the kids is 14 or under, writing about boys getting turned on if a girl is pinning them or he is pinning her is fine as long as to much emphasis isn't put on that and is more focused on the girl or guy being in a dominant position or victorious ("she moved up to hips just resting softly against his chin, her legs immobilized his arms"). The same rule applies for submission holds (i.e headscissors, chokes, etc.) 16yrs old and up is fair game because actually studies show that is about the age most people become sexually active. Clothing wise, unless they are boyfriend and girlfriend, it is just safe at a bare minimum to have the girl in a bikini. For guys the bare minimum should be boxer briefs.

3) Unrealistic results
I'll make this short and sweet. It is my opinion that it is hotter to write about a situation that could theoretically happen. A 12 yr old, 5'0", 95lbs girl isn't going to beat a 18 yr old, 6'5", 200lbs guy. If its a 3 on 1, maybe or shes been training in martial arts for 10 yrs and has a black belt, and he has absolutely 0 muscle mass and has never trained in a fight, maybe this could happen 1:100 times. But other than that the guy is winning.
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Old 02-Dec-17, 13:49
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Default Re: My biggest pet peeves in m/f stories

I agree completely with all your points. Personally, I would allow a bit of leeway on point #4 (the "second" point #3?), or your last point.

Many of these stories are fantasy, and I do like the scenario where a smaller, solidly built (but not overtly muscular) female overpowers and defeats a larger, reasonably well-built man. I think we've all encountered women who fit the description of "stronger than she looks". I'm not saying stronger than the man, but still deceptively strong. And again, this is a fantasy issue.

Personally, I have seen situations where women such as I've described have actually beaten larger men at arm-wrestling or been able to hold a man pinned down or trapped in a bear hug.

The fantasy I'm tired of is the 6'7" woman with 30 inch biceps (seriously - have you ever seen one?) going up against a 5'6" who refuses to believe any woman could defeat him because he's a man - and then it's supposed to be a shock when she actually wins.

Hey - if I ever meet a 6'7" woman with 30 inch biceps I won't have to fantasize that she could defeat, I already know she could!!!

I feel the same way you do. Enough with the overly brutal domination and slavery and enough with the over emphasis on sexual content, straight or perverse. I'm not saying there can't or shouldn't be stories of that nature, I'm just saying they shouldn't all be of that nature. I know there's room for all types of stories - I'd just like to see more variety.

I'm an adult. I know where to find pornography if I want it, and that's not what I come to this site for.
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