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Old 11-Apr-22, 05:50
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Default Re: A Bet With The Girls Softball Team

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Why am I doubting you? Because this story has the boys as the protagonists and the softball girls as the antagonists, which is weird for this site. Usually, those roles would be reversed with a wink and a nod because we already know the ending.


You are outside of your and this site's comfort zone. You expect me to believe this story will be some cheesy Disney movie where the boys overcome the rampant bullying of the girls and strike back only for both sides to negotiate a truce and work to improve their abilities for next season?




That spells "If you don't like my politics, don't buy my book. Problem solved." to me. All that from me doubting your ability to write a story where the males are the protagonists? All you had to do was write a good story and prove me wrong. This just says you're going to double down and break the protagonists just because they're male and it's expected.
Lmao what stories have you wrote? I just don’t get what ur tryna accomplish here, like do you feel smart now or something? Read something else and chill w the negativity.
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Old 11-Apr-22, 09:15
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Why am I doubting you? Because this story has the boys as the protagonists and the softball girls as the antagonists, which is weird for this site. Usually, those roles would be reversed with a wink and a nod because we already know the ending.


You are outside of your and this site's comfort zone. You expect me to believe this story will be some cheesy Disney movie where the boys overcome the rampant bullying of the girls and strike back only for both sides to negotiate a truce and work to improve their abilities for next season?




That spells "If you don't like my politics, don't buy my book. Problem solved." to me. All that from me doubting your ability to write a story where the males are the protagonists? All you had to do was write a good story and prove me wrong. This just says you're going to double down and break the protagonists just because they're male and it's expected.
What exactly is it you're trying to prove, besides being a dickhead?

He can write his story however he wants to, you saying he can't just screams entitlement
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Old 11-Apr-22, 09:40
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Default Re: A Bet With The Girls Softball Team

Just ignore the trolls - always the ones that have never tried to put something together themselves that feel the need to complain about getting other people's time for free.

Your stories are very well written, and with the different series you've done, there's a good variety of female characters which is not easy to do!
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Old 11-Apr-22, 11:32
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Why arent the guys pictures also shown
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Old 14-Apr-22, 20:54
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That spells "If you don't like my politics, don't buy my book. Problem solved." to me. All that from me doubting your ability to write a story where the males are the protagonists? All you had to do was write a good story and prove me wrong. This just says you're going to double down and break the protagonists just because they're male and it's expected.
... except you didn't "buy" anything. It's free.

You're basically trying to bully them into writing the story you want with this "bet you can't" stuff. You want a different type of story? Then you write it. Don't criticize those who try.
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Keep writing your style mate. Your fans like it and those who don't can read other stories on the site. I'm not a fan of the criticise the author mentality when it isn't constructive. They do this for free and to provide us with entertainment
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Old 02-Dec-22, 13:25
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Default Re: A Bet With The Girls Softball Team

Good story Josh. I found that most of the critics are people who only criticize, but if you look at their profiles -- they never posted any of their own work. You know the old adage, "Those who don't,,,criticize." Keep up the good work.
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