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Re: The adventures of a private tutor
Okay!!!!! Thanks for that.
Added after 13 minutes: Okay!!!! Not sure what you mean by that, but thanks for the feedback Last edited by Wormseye; 04-May-20 at 15:09. |
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Re: The adventures of a private tutor
What he means is after each paragraph it would be helpful to leave a line free of text so that we can follow the text more easily. As it appears at the moment all we see when we track back to the left hand side for the next line is a wall of text with no reference point as to where we were. What you need to do is seperate your paragraphs with an extra line, free of text.
Like this. Then we can follow it more esily. We don't know what is coming next so we don't know where to pick up the text on the left hand side as it is just a continuous vertical wall. Spaces between the paragraphs also can prevent eyestrain as it is less of a struggle to read. And we don't want it to be a struggle, because we like your stories; you create wonderful scenarios and describe them well. Even for short stories you make the characters believable. But trust me on the line breaks. ;-) Last edited by mez261uk; 05-May-20 at 10:53. Reason: spelling |
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