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Hello, Forum!

I'm looking for a writer to write a futuristic, dystopian story that would use Fight Pulse wrestlers as characters. I will send the author 15 Fight Pulse videos of their choice or the monetary equivalent - $200 - upon completion.

I've already been in communication with 2 writers about it, but I would like to make it a public contest. Here's how I propose we go about choosing the author to write it. If you wish to partake, please write a couple of paragraphs in reply to this thread, of about 300 words, from any part of the narrative (see below) that would comprise the story. I will choose the author among the 3 most Thanked posts.

Below is the narrative / premise of the story that I would like. Let's stick to it for this contest, please. However, the selected author can then offer his changes to it before beginning to write the full story. I wrote this synopsis down in 2016, so you can add / remove / change characters, since several new wrestlers have joined Fight Pulse in 2017. Ultimately, I would like more Fight Pulse characters involved in it in some role than mentioned in the premise. Also, the completed story will, hopefully, be illustrated later, as a comic book.

Premise:

It's the future. After World War III the political climate of the world has changed and evil powers rule over the world, and European countries in particular. Fight Pulse is a grappling & fighting club organized and sponsored by some oligarchs in Central Europe for their personal viewing pleasure. Some of the main events are held in an arena for the bloodthirsty public to watch as well. Each match is under a certain ruleset - boxing, MMA, grappling, wrestling. Every match ends with a victory pose, while the Patriarch decides the outcome, just like in gladiator fights, but with four options - Mercy, Humiliation, Slavery, or Death. While the public open-space arena, or the private fighting hall are raw-looking, we are in the future, so these are all technological, with microphones on robotic arms, with some flat robots cleaning the arena automatically from bloodstains and removing dead bodies. It might have a cyberpunk feel to it. When the match ends, the Patriarch clicks on a special keyboard in front of him as the decisive gesture, and one of the four letters lights up on the floor of the arena - M, H, S or D.

The oligarchs have their own favorite fighters. They sometimes "bring in" (read "force") women to fight because they are male chauvinist pigs, and they usually choose H or S when the males defeat females, because, well, they like public rape and female humiliation. When our young 20-year old heroine, let's call her Miss Rene, is forced to join Fight Pulse, although she has some definition in her arms and legs, she isn't big or physically imposing - 172, 60 kg. She is captured together with her 3 female friends, while they were hanging out together during the night. Her 3 friends all represent some real-life Fight Pulse characters, let's say Akela, Laila and Lucrecia. This will have significance shortly. When Rene is communicating with other members of Fight Pulse in the barracks we are told all these details about Fight Pulse that we know now. The barracks are separated into two - the males and females, as one of them represents predators, and the other represents prey. So, in the barracks, Rene naturally talks with the females. One or two of them can also represent real Fight Pulse wrestlers, Revana, Diana, Jane, Jenni and Zoe, maybe. There are a total of 10 ladies in the barracks when our main character and her friends arrive.

While all this story is going on, maybe during a conversation between oligarchs, maybe during Rene's first fight, whatever, we hear a story (illustrated, short, maybe 10 panels) of the only woman that was able to go past 2 wins at Fight Pulse, about 15 years ago, when Fight Pulse was a new organization, and defeating all of her first 3 opponents she met one of The Warriors in the main event, named Lupus. The Warriors are the toughest men in the world, they are combat specialists, 6'+ and strong. There were thousands of people in the arena, and everybody was waiting that The Warrior would avenge the loss of other males and humiliate her in front of everybody. Surprisingly, this woman started having the best of Lupus, knocked him down a couple of times with face-kicks and even almost submitted him with an armbar. As the oligarchs saw that this was getting out of hand, they passed a weapon to Lupus and the next time she was straddling his chest and started punching him in the face, he stabbed her with the small knife in the kidney, although the audience didn't see this. She understood what happened, but continued punching him, almost knocking him out, but soon her strength started fading and she fell over. Lupus was declared the winner. The letter on the ground showed H. He stood up unsteady on his feet, with bloodied face, and penetrated the dying woman.

Later in the story, it turns out that Rene is her daughter. She has been preparing for this for 15 years. She is on a mission of revenge. Her friends are some of the best female martial artists in the world. Akela, while small, is an extremely quick and flexible woman, and is the best female grappler in the world, easily submitting larger males getting into holds quickly and by applying leverage. She understands the human body and movement better than anyone. Laila is the stand-up fight genius, a professional kickboxer for 10 years, she recognizes what her opponents are going to do even before they start their movements, by how they breath, and their body posture, and is always able to come up with the perfect counter-attack. Lucrecia is one of the strongest people in the world. She has the genes of the Czech Silova family, the world's most powerful people, who everybody thought died out during the third world war. She was only 10 at the time, and when the military came to their house, and killed her parents, she was saved by her neighbour, Rene's mother. All 3 girls grew up together and the only thing they ever had in their minds is revenge (Rene sounds a bit like revenge, so if the name changes we should come up with something similar).

Anyways, this narrative is about women starting winning at Fight Pulse, eventually beating The Warriors, and finally taking over Fight Pulse and executing The Oligarchs. The Patriarch is able to escape before Rene kills him, as he is the main villain, and we want him alive for the next part, where maybe he is found and capture by the new female scouts of Fight Pulse and brought in to partake in the fights against the now female Warriors.

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So, guys, please write a couple of paragraphs in reply to this thread if you are interested in writing this story.
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Default Re: Fight Pulse story contest

Your tale already sounds well crafted and thought out, Zweig. What it seems you are looking for is less about development and more about filling in the existing plot with dialogue maybe the structure of the scenes that you already envision

Am I reading it wrong?
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@[Only Registered Users Can See LinksClick Here To Register], well, yes, but it's just an idea. I like it, but I'm open to any changes. I'm looking for a writer to actually write it.

I would ideally want a long well-narrated story, with character development, nice scene details and such. Action is the main part, of course, but it should be built-up.

Btw, this story will be posted on Fight Pulse website as well.
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Rene sits on top of her victim. She puts her victim in an arm bar, then transitions to a headscissor. Finally she locks in the rear-naked-choke...all the while explaining her moves to the person she just defeated.

But she didn't defeat Andreas, or Viktor. And she sure as hell isn't looking up to the Patriarchy to see how she should finish her victim off.

Rene didn't actually defeat anyone. She was training the newest girl to walk into the barracks, the beautiful Daisy Lee. Daisy is just 19-years-old, 121 pounds with beautiful blonde hair. The oligarchs captured Daisy a few nights ago. The Patriarchy and fans were upset that Rene, Lucrecia, Akele and Laila were starting to dominate their fighters, so they found easy prey. Daisy would lose, raped and eventually killed. This is what's best for business. Having women dominate men occasionally was one thing, but to constantly win? That wasn't sitting well with the patriarchy, the oligarchs or the fans. Unfortunately for them, Rene hated all three, and she made a decree. "No woman shall ever lose again to a man."

Rene trained all the girls but she was focusing on Daisy. Her match with Andreas was only a few days away. Andreas was excited. He actually contacted the patriarchy when he found out Daisy Lee was captured. He had a crush on Daisy for years. A bit older, Andreas saw Daisy's potential ever since Daisy hit puberty. Daisy rejected Andreas at every counter. But he knew she couldn't reject him anymore. He was going to enjoy this. He would demolish her in the mixed martial arts match, and then rape her in front of everyone. He had no problem killing Daisy, but he would rather not. Not out of kindness, just because he wanted to have a rematch and rape her again.

The two met the day before the match at the pre-match ceremony. Andreas said to Daisy, "You can't reject me anymore. Tomorrow I'm going to assert my dominance over you in the match, and then insert my dominance into your ass. Prepare to lose, be humiliated and then raped, little girl."

Rene couldn't take anymore. She got out of her seat and was going to kill Andreas on the spot. But Akela stopped her and said, "You trained Daisy for this very moment. Let's see what she's got."

Daisy turned to her sisters and mouthed, "I got this." She threw in a wink. All the girls cheered except Rene. Rene was worried. What was with the wink?

Daisy strode up to Andreas and said, "Outside when we were free, you badgered me for years to date you. I want you to know I didn't just reject you. I told all my friends about you. I bragged to them how you weren't in my league. Why would a beautiful girl like me ever date an ugly loser like you? We all laughed at you. You weren't in my league then, and tomorrow, I will prove to everyone, most importantly my sisters, that you're not in my league now."

She then handed Andreas a piece of paper. It said, "Dignity." Andreas looked confused. He was no longer the cocky arrogant man he was just a mere 30 seconds ago. He looked at Daisy and said what's this? She replied, "It's your dignity. And I'm taking it from you tomorrow. Bring it to the match." With that she slapped him across the face, turned to her sisters and high-fived them all. Everyone but Rene. Rene was worried. Daisy made this match personal. She has to win...
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Thanks, NewYork! I like it!

Would love to see more writers reply. Increased the compensation to 15 videos OR $200.
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I'd be happy to take the job!
I would just need a little more info. If you want part 2 to my story let me know.
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You seem to have the script already, not sure that any more would enhance the video, albeit the theme isn’t for me anyway
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The 4 girls had just witnessed their first Fight Pulse match. They returned to their dorm room quietly. They had too much on their mind to begin speaking about any of it, especially to one another. All 4 new recruits sat quietly on their respective beds.

Laila was nervous. She had just watched two young people, a man and a woman, ferociously attempt to impose their bodily will upon the other one. Only 2 weeks ago, both of those wrestlers were coworkers. They had been polite to each other. They were friends. Laila kept wondering if they were going to make her fight her own male friends soon. She didn’t want to. She didn’t want to have to hurt her male friends.

Akela was intrigued. No, she didn’t relish the idea of having her life on the line, or being forced to end other’s lives. But she’s been a warrior her entire life. Her training had been more intensive than any man she’s ever met. The idea that she now could have an opportunity to prove and improve her skills made her strangely excited. Watching that unskilled woman inadvertently end up ass-first on her male opponent’s face and actually end up winning the match via smothering piqued her curiosity. Could she incorporate her own butt into her deadly move skillset? She wanted to find out. She wanted to keep improving her fighting craft until she was the deadliest person on the planet, male or female.

Lucrecia was thrilled. She was cocksure that she could win every match here. But what thrilled her the most was the fact that, at the end of each, she would get a reward for her victory. She had just watched a female warrior force the defeated male to kiss her ass 50 times on each cheek. Lucrecia knew that if it was her in that ring, that weakling’s humiliation would have far worse, and far more creative. She looked forward to humiliating men, making them her slave, and yes, even ending their lives. The only option she wasn’t fond of was the mercy option. She didn’t like to give mercy to her opponents.

Rene had the most on her mind, though. Ironically, she didn’t even have her eyes on the match. She was looking at the man controlling the match the whole time. They called him The Patriarch. He was the one who chose that man and that woman to fight. He was the one who gave her the order to humiliate him. He was the one behind all of this. She wasn’t watching the fight, because she was watching him. She wanted to remember his face, so she would know what her target looked like. She was going to kill him.
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