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Re: A Disaster in my First MMA Fight
joha7 great job .....loved it .... keep going
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I liked it! It was a good exploration into the after effects of such a loss. I think i would have liked a little something about Mom trying to encourage her son back into the sport, but overall this was good! Hope to see more of your work.
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he should challenge his mom again and this time mom takes it slow and let the son take his strikes on her and then after her son is done.... she removed her jacket and show her steel body and then brutally teaches him why he shouldn't be messing with her
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Hope they fight again but next time she chokes him out
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Perfect relationship description between mom and son. Though you prefer short stories, hope there would sequels pushing the domination into higher levels
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Thanks everyone, I’m not gonna continue this story for now but maybe I’ll come back to it later. We might see the son get back into mma one day.
My next story is already mostly planned out, I just need to start writing. |
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Re: A Disaster in my First MMA Fight
Ill be anxiously awaiting that next story.
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Re: A Disaster in my First MMA Fight
joha7 will it be mom vs son story
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