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Old 16-Oct-19, 06:00
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Hey guys - appreciate the shoutout!
I haven't gone anywhere, I still check in pretty regularly (mostly to see if VVP has written another chapter to "Ned and Susan"), just haven't written anything in a while. Seems like my particular niche, wherein a smaller, younger girl defeats and humiliates a bigger, older guy, is not much in vogue.
I totally understand; after all, this is the "Mixed Wrestling Forum", but I just can't get into the idea of muscle babes. Reading about grown women duking it out with guys just doesn't do it for me and I can't write about that. But, while waiting for inspiration to strike it seems like time just got away from me and months have gone by.
Bummer!
It may be I don't have another story in me, but time will tell. In the meantime, thanks for the support!
While a new story is always very interesting, you don't have to write a whole new story. There is many that you have started that you can continue and I am sure everyone would enjoy that just as much
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Hey guys - appreciate the shoutout!
I haven't gone anywhere, I still check in pretty regularly (mostly to see if VVP has written another chapter to "Ned and Susan"), just haven't written anything in a while. Seems like my particular niche, wherein a smaller, younger girl defeats and humiliates a bigger, older guy, is not much in vogue.
I totally understand; after all, this is the "Mixed Wrestling Forum", but I just can't get into the idea of muscle babes. Reading about grown women duking it out with guys just doesn't do it for me and I can't write about that. But, while waiting for inspiration to strike it seems like time just got away from me and months have gone by.
Bummer!
It may be I don't have another story in me, but time will tell. In the meantime, thanks for the support!
The problem is you are perhaps the best writer in that milieu. So we must all bask in your greatness!
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I don't want muscle babes, I want what you are so great at writing.
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My two cents:

Story started really well, Julia's character really well fleshed out. Really enjoyed the psychological pressure and dominance she was having over Jason. More importantly, I loved how matter of factly, she could state facts to Jason: 1) that she could own him, 2) that no matter how much Jason trained, Julia would always be bigger and stronger tham him... Few chapters later:

1) The story gets a more soap opera feel, with the "Not your real brother" "Our love cannot be" scenarios.

2) Julia frankly staying pretty much the same with every timeskip, and blatantly stating she was like Jennifer Lopez?? Completely ended the seeded idea of Julia being someone whose ass was etched out of marble...

Now, the story seems to be turning into an espionage or political thriller. Surely miss Julia's protagonism (I felt Jason was merely the narrator vehicle), and the tagline of one of the stories: Julia going to make the world her bitch.

Still, well written story. Just feels like some original ideas and concepts were scraped off along the way.

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