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My two cents:
Story started really well, Julia's character really well fleshed out. Really enjoyed the psychological pressure and dominance she was having over Jason. More importantly, I loved how matter of factly, she could state facts to Jason: 1) that she could own him, 2) that no matter how much Jason trained, Julia would always be bigger and stronger tham him... Few chapters later: 1) The story gets a more soap opera feel, with the "Not your real brother" "Our love cannot be" scenarios. 2) Julia frankly staying pretty much the same with every timeskip, and blatantly stating she was like Jennifer Lopez?? Completely ended the seeded idea of Julia being someone whose ass was etched out of marble... Now, the story seems to be turning into an espionage or political thriller. Surely miss Julia's protagonism (I felt Jason was merely the narrator vehicle), and the tagline of one of the stories: Julia going to make the world her bitch. Still, well written story. Just feels like some original ideas and concepts were scraped off along the way. Last edited by Mastron; 05-Nov-19 at 05:34. |
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